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I will a developmental critique and beta read your novel
Keeper Of Stories
I’m a writer, beta reader, and story-focused editor who helps authors strengthen their books through thoughtful, honest, and practical feedback.
I specialise in fantasy, romance, dark fantasy, paranor...
About this Gig
I will beta read and critique your fantasy, romance, YA/NA, paranormal, dark fantasy, or character-driven fiction manuscript and provide honest, detailed, and respectful feedback.
As a writer and passionate reader, I know how personal a manuscript can be. My goal is to help you understand how your story feels from the readers side: what works, what feels unclear, what slows the pacing, and where the emotional impact could be stronger.
My feedback may cover pacing, plot structure, character motivation, dialogue, romantic chemistry, worldbuilding clarity, tension, opening hook, confusing scenes, emotional beats, and overall reader engagement.
You will receive a clear reader report with practical notes, honest reactions, and suggestions where needed. I do not rewrite your story or change your voice. Instead, I help you see the strengths and weak spots more clearly so you can revise with confidence.
This service is ideal for writers who need a fresh perspective on their chapters, opening pages, novella, or manuscript before editing, publishing, or sharing with readers.
Please send your manuscript as a Word document or Google Docs file, and let me know if there is anything specific you
Language:
Bulgarian
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English
Audience :
General readers
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Teen / young adult
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Adult
Complexity level:
Simple / easy read
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Intermediate
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Advanced
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
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FAQ
What genres do you accept?
I mainly work with fantasy, romance, YA/NA, paranormal, dark fantasy, and character-driven fiction. I may also accept other fiction genres, so feel free to message me before ordering.
What will your beta reader feedback include?
My feedback may cover pacing, plot clarity, character motivation, dialogue, emotional impact, romance chemistry, worldbuilding, tension, opening hook, confusing scenes, and overall reader engagement.
Do you edit grammar and spelling?
This is a beta reading and story critique service, not a proofreading or line editing service. I may point out repeated grammar or style issues if I notice them, but I will not correct every sentence.
Will you rewrite parts of my manuscript?
No. I do not rewrite your story or change your voice. I provide reader feedback, suggestions, and guidance so you can revise your manuscript yourself.
Do you provide inline comments?
Inline comments are available as an extra service. If selected, I will add comments directly to your Word document or Google Docs file with reader reactions, questions, and notes.
Can you read longer manuscripts?
Yes. If your manuscript is longer than the package word count, you can add extra words or message me for a custom offer.
What file format should I send?
Please send your manuscript as a Word document, PDF, or Google Docs link. For inline comments, Word or Google Docs is best.
Will my story stay private?
Yes. Your manuscript will be treated as confidential. I will not share, copy, publish, or use your work in any way.
Can I ask you to focus on specific issues?
Absolutely. You can tell me what you are worried about, such as pacing, characters, romance, worldbuilding, opening chapters, plot holes, or reader engagement.
What does a revision mean for this service?
A revision means I can clarify or expand on my feedback if something is unclear. It does not include rereading a rewritten or newly revised manuscript.
