I will evaluate your first 10 pages

I will read and break down your first 10 pages of your screenplay. When writing a script your first 10 pages are most crucial. If they don't grab the reader or if it is not properly formatted it will be tossed, alongside the thousands of others that didn't capture their audience within the introduction into their story.

On a one hour long phone conversation we will discuss:

1. What is your goal? Who are you trying to reach? What are you trying to say?
2. Who are your characters? How do you want the reader to perceive them?
3. My opinion of what I experienced in your first 10 pages.
4. How we can improve others impressions of your first 10 pages.
5. Steps you can take next, to push your script to the next level.