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I will audit your story world for power structure and hidden inconsistencies
Story Dynamics Mapper und Narrative Systems Analyst: Pre Story Diagnostics
I believe the best stories don’t happen by accident. They happen when the foundation is solid.
I explore the fundamental conditions from which stories arise: fractures, tensions, stabilising forces, a...
About this Gig
Do you feel something is off in your world? You have a complex world full of ideas, but it feels chaotic. You sense hidden contradictions in your magic system, politics, or character motivations, but you cant pinpoint them. You risk writing 300 pages only to realise the foundation is cracked.
I am your safety net. As a Narrative Systems Analyst, I audit your worlds underlying logic.
What you get (The Deliverables):
- System Analysis Dossier: A structured report identifying logical cracks, power fractures, and hidden tensions.
- Character Logic Check: Deep-dive into motivations to ensure actions align with psychology and system pressure.
- Actionable Roadmap: Concrete steps to fix inconsistencies before they become plot holes.
Result: You gain clarity, stability, and the confidence to write knowing your world holds together.
Perfect for: Fantasy/Sci-Fi creators, stuck writers, and worldbuilders overwhelmed by their own lore. (Note: Structural analysis only. No proofreading, proofreading or graphics.)
Not sure? Start with the BASIC Package (30 Euro)!. Its the perfect low-risk way to test my style before committing to a larger project.
Questions? Feel free to dm me anytime.
Language:
English
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
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FAQ
Who is this offer for?
Ideal for indie authors, game developers, TTRPG and narrative projects.
Is the entire script necessary?
The full script is not required. Bullet points about your world are sufficient. My work is system-focused, not text-focused. Bullet points and rough drafts are preferred!
How much text can I send?
Send me your worldbuilding notes, magic system description, or character sketches. Either: A jumble of bullet points, brainstorming notes, a short summary (approx. 200–500 words (about 2p.)). I will deliver a comprehensive logic check and deep-dive analysis. context: “Letharis” had 150 words given.
Was beinhaltet das Launch Offer?
Inhalt: 1–2 Seiten. Konzentriert sich auf eine zentrale, brennende Frage des Autors (z. B. „Funktioniert mein Magiesystem?“ oder „Ist mein Antagonist glaubwürdig?“). Teste meine Analyse-Tiefe zum Preis eines No-Brainers!
What’s included in the Premium package?
Ein 8+ seitiges Strategie-Dossier (PDF) mit visueller Scorecard, kompakter Zusammenfassung der wichtigsten Erkenntnisse, psychologischer Tiefenanalyse (Trauma, Motivation & Hintergrundgeschichte), Szenario-Experimenten, Fraktionsanalyse sowie klarem Entwicklungsfahrplan. (Letharis example)
Is everything confidential?
Yes. All ideas, characters, and world-building elements remain strictly confidential. I do not share content and only use it for feedback and the development of your world. An NDA can be provided on request.
Do you only work with fantasy?
Yes, my focus is on fantasy and related genres, particularly literary fantasy, psychological worlds, and complex systems and power structures.
Do you use AI for analysis?
No! My analysis, logic and ideas are 100% human. I translate the finished German report into English with save tools. This way, you get the depth of thought from the German text in clear, understandable English. The quality comes from me; the language comes from the tool (DeepL/Pons).
Why German first, then English?
Because complex logic and nuances are more precise in German. I analyse in my native language for maximum depth and only then translate the result. This avoids shallow “Denglish” analyses and gives real readable substance.
What does “Revision” mean?
1x Clarification session included: If you have any questions about the dossier you have received, you are welcome to ask for clarification. I do not completely rewrite your story idea if you make fundamental changes to it after receiving the analysis.
