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I will beta read your fantasy or scifi novel
About this Gig
Expert Beta Reading for Fantasy & Sci-Fi Enthusiasts!
Are you looking for a reader who actually understands the gears of a great story? With extensive experience in Tabletop RPG world-building and creative writing, I don't just read your manuscriptI dive into your world.
What I will analyze for you:
- Plot & Pacing: Is the hook strong enough? Are there any plot holes?
- World-Building: Are your magic systems or technology consistent and immersive?
- Character Arcs: Do your protagonists feel real and motivated?
- Dialogue & Engagement: Does the "voice" of your story resonate?
Why choose me? As a dedicated fan of Fantasy (Medieval/Urban) and Sci-Fi, I am used to analyzing complex lore and power systems (from Tormenta to Hard Sci-Fi). Whether you have a LitRPG, a Grimdark novel, or a Space Opera, I provide honest, constructive, and detailed feedback.
Special Services Included:
- Detailed Reader Report.
- Honest reactions as a fan and critic.
- Technical check on world consistency.
Let's work together to make your manuscript the best it can be. Send me a message or order now!
Language:
English
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Portuguese
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
What genres do you specialize in?
I specialize in Fantasy (Medieval, Urban, Grimdark) and Sci-Fi. As a tabletop RPG enthusiast and world-builder, I am particularly skilled at analyzing magic systems, power levels, and complex lore.
Does your service include proofreading or grammar editing?
No, this is a Beta Reading service focused on story structure, pacing, world-building, and character arcs. While I may point out recurring issues, I do not provide full grammar or spelling proofreading.
What will the Reader Report look like?
You will receive a detailed PDF document covering my honest reactions as a reader, technical feedback on your world-building, plot consistency, and specific suggestions on how to improve engagement.
How does the "Campaign Chronicles" extra work?
You send me your session notes, recordings, or adventure logs, and I will transform them into a compelling, "novelized" narrative summary for your players or for your future book project.
