I will beta read and developmental edit your fantasy, sci fi, or romance book

United Kingdom

I speak English, Spanish, German, French

Get Honest Feedback Before You Publish

Finished your manuscript but unsure how readers will respond? I’m Thomas Walker, a professional beta reader helping authors identify confusing plot points, pacing issues, weak character development, i...
About this Gig

BETA READING | BOOK EDITING | DEVELOPMENTAL EDITING


Do you want a fresh pair of eyes on your manuscript with honest, constructive, and reader-focused feedback? Whether your story is a dark romance, science fiction, fantasy, or YA novel, Ill be your trusted beta/alpha reader to ensure your story truly resonates with readers.


As an experienced editor and passionate reader, I know what keeps audiences turning pages and what causes them to lose interest. I provide detailed feedback on:


  • Plot flow, pacing, and consistency
  • Character development and believability
  • World-building (especially for fantasy & YA)
  • Dialogue authenticity and emotional depth
  • Reader engagement (does your story hook?)


Working with me, you'll receive clear, actionable insights that refine your manuscript before publishing or submitting to agents. Think of me as your first reader, highlighting both strengths and areas for improvement, so your book shines with professional polish.

Send me your draft today, and lets bring out the best in your story!

Genre:

Children’s books

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Horror/ thriller

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Memoir/ biography

Language:

English

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German

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