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I will help you repair your plot worldbuilding and story structure
United States
I speak English
Story Mechanic
My goal is to help writers see what their draft is already doing right, where readers may feel confused and what practical changes could make the story land more clearly.
I focus on big-picture story...
About this Gig
Have a story idea, outline or messy draft that feels exciting, but not quite workable yet?
I will help you find the strongest core of your story and give you clear, practical feedback on what is working, what is confusing and what to adjust to next.
This gig focuses on big-picture story development: plot, character motivation, worldbuilding, structure, theme, pacing, reader experience and next steps.
I do not rewrite, copyedit or proofread your story. Instead, I give you a written story report that helps you understand what your draft is doing, where it may be getting tangled and how to make it stronger while keeping your voice intact.
This is best for writers with big ideas, messy outlines, complicated worlds, early drafts or story concepts that need direction before line editing.
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
Is this proofreading or copy editing?
No. This is developmental-style story feedback. I focus on plot, structure, character motivation, worldbuilding, theme, reader confusion and next steps. I do not correct every grammar or punctuation issue.
Will you rewrite my story for me?
No. I will help you understand what is working, what feels unclear and how to make the story stronger, but I do not rewrite or ghostwrite the project.
What should I send you?
You can send a premise, outline, worldbuilding notes, story summary or manuscript excerpt, depending on the package you choose.
What does a revision include?
A revision means clarification or adjustment to the feedback report. It does not include reading new material, reviewing a revised draft or creating a second full report.
Do you use AI on my manuscript?
I personally read and respond to your submitted work. I do not paste client manuscripts into AI tools unless a client explicitly gives permission.
