I will provide developmental editing and a detailed manuscript critique

I understand how overwhelming it can feel to trust someone else with your manuscript. Your story matters, and finding an editor who truly understands your vision is essential. Thats why I offer a free sample edit of your first chapter, so you can be confident that were the right fit before moving forward. My goal is to help you strengthen your story while preserving your unique voice.

I will provide detailed feedback on:

• Author voice and consistency
• Plot and overall story structure
• Character development and emotional arcs
• Setting and worldbuilding
• Reader engagement and investment
• Dialogue clarity and flow
• Opening scene and hook
• Pacing and scene transitions
• Themes and narrative focus
• Any specific areas you'd like me to focus on

I can also offer line editing only, or a combined package that includes both line and developmental editing, depending on your needs.

You will receive:

• Extensive in-line comments and suggestions
• A detailed chapter-by-chapter editorial report
• A comprehensive overall report highlighting strengths and areas for improvement

Please note that I work exclusively in Microsoft Word to ensure proper tracking of edits and comments.