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I will read and critique a story for you
I write fictional stories for a hobby, usually fantasy although I also have come to appreciate writing more realistic pieces about our current era. I am a college student, so during the school year I ...
About this Gig
I will critique any story you've written for you! Just send me your story and I will read it and give you a proper critique on what I thought was good, what could be changed, and what could be better. I will give tips about the grammar and anything else that could be profitable to your story being the best it can possibly be. My critiques are mostly related to the storyline and the flow of the story, rather than the grammar, but if I see anything really out of place I will be sure to mention it!
As for length of the story, I'm going to say 10 pages at the most for a proper critique in the amount of time given.
As for length of the story, I'm going to say 10 pages at the most for a proper critique in the amount of time given.
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hatter
United States
cancelled order. seller failed to deliver on time!
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brentonstrine
United States
tomlinsunlights did a great job with my story. About 500 words of critique initially plus additional followup answers to some specific questions I had. Good mix of positive and "critical" feedback, her perspective was a huge help for me.
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Helpful?H hannylove
Sweden
Great job
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stylograph
United States
Wish I could say the same as others did about their happiness of a solid critique he provided them. For me, he responded so briefly (barely a sentence of actual feedback) it left me wondering whether he bothered to read the material at all, mentioning two comments so vague and without context to be useless. Though I'm tempted to guess he found hims
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rodneyohebsion
Repeat Client
United States
Very helpful. THanks.
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Reviews
12 reviews for this Gig
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Rating Breakdown
- Seller communication level
- Recommend to a friend
- Service as described
Sort By
Most relevant
H hatter
United States
cancelled order. seller failed to deliver on time!
Helpful?B brentonstrine
United States
tomlinsunlights did a great job with my story. About 500 words of critique initially plus additional followup answers to some specific questions I had. Good mix of positive and "critical" feedback, her perspective was a huge help for me.
T Seller's Response
Helpful?H hannylove
Sweden
Great job
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Helpful?S stylograph
United States
Wish I could say the same as others did about their happiness of a solid critique he provided them. For me, he responded so briefly (barely a sentence of actual feedback) it left me wondering whether he bothered to read the material at all, mentioning two comments so vague and without context to be useless. Though I'm tempted to guess he found hims
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Helpful?R rodneyohebsion
Repeat Client
United States
Very helpful. THanks.
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