I will be your youtube script doctor to optimise retention and avd

Is your YouTube channel struggling with a low Average View Duration (AVD)?

The truth is, most scripts fail in the first 30 seconds. AI-generated scripts are often flat, repetitive, and lack the psychological tension required to keep a modern audience hooked.

As an experienced scriptwriter, specialising in documentary-style storytelling, I will diagnose and surgically repair your draft to keep viewers glued to the screen.

What I do as your Script Doctor:

Hook Engineering: Completely rewrite your intro to eliminate early drop-offs.

Pacing & Tension: Eliminate fluff, tighten transitions, and insert pattern interrupts.

VO Optimisation: Polish the flow so it sounds natural, conversational, and compelling when spoken.

How it works:

You provide your raw draft (human or AI-generated). I return a polished, high-retention script optimised for maximum watch time.

Note: Your script must be a coherent draft. If your AI script needs a complete ground-up rewrite, please message me first for a custom offer!

Let's fix your retention metrics. Order today!