I will provide substantive developmental edit your book, novel book editor

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5.0

Nigeria

I speak English, German, Spanish, French

1 order completed

Editor

Welcome to Torilit — your dedicated partner for professional book editing and manuscript improvement. Writing a book is a major achievement, but getting a manuscript ready for readers takes more than...
About this Gig

Now accepting new projects. Please message me before ordering to confirm availability and discuss your manuscript.


I'm a professional developmental editor and manuscript reviewer dedicated to helping authors turn promising drafts into stronger, more engaging stories.


I focus on the big-picture elements of your manuscript while respecting your individual writing style, creative vision, and goals as an author. My approach is thoughtful, honest, and constructiveIll show you what is working, identify areas that may need improvement, and provide practical suggestions for revision.


I work with a range of fiction genres, including Fantasy, Romantasy, Romance, Science Fiction, Mystery, Thriller, Contemporary, YA, NA, and Adult fiction.


What You'll Receive:

  • Detailed Editorial Feedback covering plot structure, character development, pacing, conflict, worldbuilding, POV, tone, and emotional impact.
  • Actionable Suggestions to strengthen weaker areas and build on the elements that are already working.
  • In-Line Manuscript Comments pointing out scenes, dialogue, character moments, or sections that may need clarification.

Language:

Dutch

English

French

German

Genre:

Action

Adventure

Children’s books

Comic book

Fanfiction

Audience :

General readers

Children

Teen / young adult

Adult

POV:

First person

Second person

Third person limited

Complexity level:

Simple / easy read

Intermediate

Advanced

Voice:

Active

Delivery style preference

Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.

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    thank you for looking over these three chapters in letting me know what needs to be worked on and what needs to be handled. the comments about more character details and trimming and at least optimizing backstory information is very important thank you on that. additionally thank you for looking at where...

    $200-$400

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1 reviews for this Gig
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  • Seller communication level
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    5
  • Value of delivery
    5
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    voicedbyshannon

    US

    United States

    5

    thank you for looking over these three chapters in letting me know what needs to be worked on and what needs to be handled. the comments about more character details and trimming and at least optimizing backstory information is very important thank you on that. additionally thank you for looking at where...

    $200-$400

    Price

    2 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No