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I will developmental book edit your ya and adult novel
Structural and Developmental book editor
As not only a freelance editor but also a fellow Author currently under publication, I look forward to nothing more than extending my expertise to those in my community whose penmanship could use a mo...
About this Gig
My Structural book editing service delivers fine touches for 'big picture' improvements to your manuscript. With a focused attention on Narrative voice, consistency, and tone, I help organize the coherence & flow of your storytelling. Every fix, along with each personal recommendation, is thoroughly explained in an assessment, notes, and/or my thorough review (Premium trademark Critique).
Key milestones are:
- Sentence-level revisions focusing on style, flow, clarity, and voice.
- Review plot, pacing, motivation, setting, character development, and consistency.
- Offer detailed suggestions and notated feedback.
"What makes me different than other Literary Editors?"
Is because I know what you're going through, and I know what it takes to breathe life into sheets of paper. What you're doing isn't easy, nor should you do it alone. Everyone has a story to tell, and I want to help yours be the best that it can be.
I like to create a unique experience with each author, providing hard truths and honest feedback while also being encouraging where I see moments of brilliance. My reports are in-depth, leaving nothing to interpretation.
Language:
English
Audience :
Teen / young adult
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Adult
POV:
First person
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Third person limited
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Multiple POVs
Complexity level:
Intermediate
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Advanced
Voice:
Passive
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
My Portfolio
FAQ
Can I sample your work?
Yes, message me for a scheduled assessment and have the first 4 pages of your manuscript ready. The service will be the minimum $5.00 fee. (Samples will be subject for free use in my portfolio.)
What is "The Ultimate Critique?"
The Ultimate Critique is a (15-20 page) Thorough and full review of your manuscript, where I will explain what I feel works in your story, and doesn't. Each critique will come with examples and my personal suggestion for fixes. This service however, only comes with the 'Premium' package.
How do revisions requests/submissions work.
Revisions are largely focused on Structural editing, and priced at a 50% discount from full. However, the window for revisions will only last 21 days after the date of order completion. Outside that time frame, the price & service returns to FULL. (Limited to 1 request, only available for Premium)
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D dngdavis
United States
I have used this provider before. Once again I find that his analysis is very thorough and well considered. Not only are the edits very beneficial, time is taken to explain why certain edits are made and how it makes the work better. No better value for your money.
$200-$400
Price
4 weeks
Duration
Helpful?D dngdavis
United States
I enjoyed working with this provider. Communication was clear, and I was kept up to date on the progress. I felt the final result far exceeded my expectations. The provider came through on all promises. I got exceptional value for my money and would, without question, use this provider again. Super experience!
$200-$400
Price
2 weeks
Duration
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arifoxx
Canada
Glad I decided to give Sinn a try! He worked on my manuscript, an early draft btw, and gave amazing suggestions, notes, and feedback. I haven’t worked with many editors, and really have only been interested in just finding the one or two I can stick with for this book, and maybe even those to come. So...
$50
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1 day
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D dngdavis
United States
I have used this provider before. Once again I find that his analysis is very thorough and well considered. Not only are the edits very beneficial, time is taken to explain why certain edits are made and how it makes the work better. No better value for your money.
$200-$400
Price
4 weeks
Duration
Helpful?D dngdavis
United States
I enjoyed working with this provider. Communication was clear, and I was kept up to date on the progress. I felt the final result far exceeded my expectations. The provider came through on all promises. I got exceptional value for my money and would, without question, use this provider again. Super experience!
$200-$400
Price
2 weeks
Duration
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Helpful?A arifoxx
Canada
Glad I decided to give Sinn a try! He worked on my manuscript, an early draft btw, and gave amazing suggestions, notes, and feedback. I haven’t worked with many editors, and really have only been interested in just finding the one or two I can stick with for this book, and maybe even those to come. So...
$50
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1 day
Duration
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