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I will fix ya fantasy novels plot holes, pacing, magic system as developmental editor
Turning good manuscripts into unforgettable books
Hi, I’m Vanessa Nancy, a professional book editor.
5+ years editing fiction & nonfiction for indie authors and publishers.
BA in English & Publishing Studies.
Edited a debut novel that reached Amazon ...
About this Gig
A brilliant YA fantasy deserves more than great ideasit needs a story that keeps readers turning pages.
Weak pacing, confusing magic systems, inconsistent worldbuilding, and plot holes can prevent even the most imaginative novel from reaching its full potential.
These issues often go unnoticed because authors are too close to their own work.
I'm Vanessa Nancy, a developmental editor dedicated to strengthening your manuscript with thoughtful, actionable feedback.
Backed by formal editing knowledge and hands on experience reviewing fantasy fiction, I help refine structure, character arcs, pacing, conflict, and believable magic systems while preserving your unique voice.
My expertise covers YA fantasy, epic fantasy, urban fantasy, paranormal, and speculative fiction.
I also provide chapter critiques, editorial reports, and revision guidance.
If you're ready to transform your manuscript into a compelling, polished story that captivates readers, let's begin today.
Language:
English
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French
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German
Audience :
Teen / young adult
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Adult
POV:
First person
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Second person
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Multiple POVs
Complexity level:
Intermediate
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Advanced
Voice:
Narrative
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
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FAQ
What type of editing do you provide?
I provide developmental editing focused on story structure, pacing, plot consistency, character development, worldbuilding, and magic systems rather than grammar correction.
Do you edit completed novels?
Yes. I review both completed manuscripts and individual chapters, depending on your chosen package.
Will you rewrite my story?
No. I provide detailed feedback and revision recommendations while preserving your unique writing style and creative vision.
Which fantasy genres do you work with?
I specialize in YA fantasy, epic fantasy, urban fantasy, paranormal fantasy, dark fantasy, and other speculative fiction.
What file format should I send?
Please send your manuscript as a Microsoft Word (.docx) document so I can provide organized comments and suggestions.
