I will critique your first chapter and provide actionable feedback

Vanessa S.

Brazil

I speak English, Portuguese, Italian

Professional English and Italian Beta Reader

Hi! I'm a professional translator, editor, and proofreader with two decades of experience working with books, translations, and English and Italian texts. I specialize in preparing originals and mana...
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About this Gig

Your first chapter determines whether readers keep reading. I will carefully read your opening chapter and provide detailed, honest, and constructive feedback from a reader's perspective. My critique focuses on: hook and opening pages; character introduction; dialogue; pacing; clarity; worldbuilding (when applicable); overall engagement.

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critique your first chapter and provide actionable feedback
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critique your first chapter and provide actionable feedback

Genre:

Children’s books

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Literary fiction

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Motivational

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Psychology

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Language:

English

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Portuguese

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