I will beta reading and honest manuscript feedback

Brazil

I speak English, Portuguese, Spanish

Your story's first fan, and toughest critic

I help writers polish their work before it reaches readers. I offer beta reading (honest reader feedback), line editing (tightening prose and flow), and translation (English/Portuguese) for general an...
About this Gig

Have you finished your manuscript but aren't sure it's ready for readers?

Getting feedback from friends or family often means polite praise, not the honest reaction you actually need before publishing. That's where a beta reader comes in.

What I offer:

I read your manuscript as a genuinely engaged reader, not a professional editor, and give you honest, organized feedback on what's working and what might lose your audience.

What you'll get feedback on:

  • Pacing: where the story flows, where it drags
  • Character consistency: do actions and motivations feel true?
  • Plot clarity: confusing parts or logic gaps
  • First impressions: does your opening hook the reader?
  • A balanced view of strengths and areas to improve

Why me:

I read across all genres and work in both English and Portuguese. I'm also a psychology student, which shapes how I evaluate whether characters' emotions and choices feel believable.

How it works:

Choose a package, send your manuscript and answer a few quick questions, and I'll deliver a clear written report by the agreed deadline.

This isn't a proofreading or line editing service, my focus is entirely on story and reader experience.

Ready to see your story through a reader

Genre:

Fanfiction

Horror/ thriller

Romance

Science fiction

Fantasy

Language:

English

Portuguese

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