I will be your science fiction or fantasy developmental editor

Vetted Pro

4.9
4.9

United States

I speak English, Spanish

650 orders completed

Professional storyteller for hire!

I'm an independent author and former English teacher working on Science Fiction and Fantasy books. I know what it takes to write, revise, and edit stories, and I have personal experience in the cost a...
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  • Beta Reading

  • Book & eBook Writing

  • Book Editing

  • Proofreading & Editing

  • Writing Advice

About this Gig

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Are you part of the way through writing a speculative fiction novel?


Consider hiring me as your developmental editor to give you thoughtful feedback and suggestions before you've written yourself into a corner or even to help you write your way out.


As a full-time independent writer and editor who's worked on hundreds on projects, both my own and for commission, I know what it's like to write "by the seat of your pants" and end up in unexpected places. Take advantage of my hard-won experience and knowledge of writing craft by sending me a message about your project.


Together we'll find the secret ingredient your story is missing.


Quick General Feedback: Are you looking to get some general feedback in a timely manner? I'll make big picture suggestions and provide my impressions about the overall narrative.


Work in Progress: If you have disconnected scenes and a vague plan but hit some difficulty, then I'll help you cut out what isn't working and plot a solution.


Novel Structural Edit: I will provide a general critique of your manuscript, identifying areas for improvement when it comes to world-building, character development, writing style, and the overall plot.

Language:

English

Genre:

Action

Adventure

History

Horror/ thriller

Mystery

Audience :

General readers

Teen / young adult

Adult

POV:

First person

Second person

Third person limited

Complexity level:

Simple / easy read

Intermediate

Advanced

Voice:

Active

Delivery style preference

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15 reviews for this Gig
4.9

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  • Value of delivery
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    bragiecon

    DE

    Germany

    5

    Victor gave thoughtful and helpful feedback on my story. Thanks.

    $100-$200

    Price

    11 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
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    vtorres184

    US

    United States

    5

    Great work.

    $50-$100

    Price

    7 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
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    slavetotheframe

    NL

    Netherlands

    5

    it was a quick turnaround and exactly what I needed to hear. thank you so much! we'll definitely work with you again

    $100-$200

    Price

    4 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
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    exeilcynal

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    I have an idea for a story I want to tell and this madlad went above and beyond to critique my work! I'd trust him to teach my dog to drive 🐝

    $100-$200

    Price

    10 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
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    michaelmiles467

    IM

    Isle of Man

    4.7

    Victor took the time to really understand my story and what I wanted from it and really helped with some excellent narrative suggestions that will really help me polish up my stories significantly. I really appreciate his input, was very much worth the price.

    $100-$200

    Price

    8 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
Reviews

15 reviews for this Gig
4.9

(15)
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Rating Breakdown
  • Seller communication level
    5
  • Quality of delivery
    5
  • Value of delivery
    4.8
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Most relevant
  • B

    bragiecon

    DE

    Germany

    5

    Victor gave thoughtful and helpful feedback on my story. Thanks.

    $100-$200

    Price

    11 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • V
    image-docs

    vtorres184

    US

    United States

    5

    Great work.

    $50-$100

    Price

    7 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • S
    image-docs

    slavetotheframe

    NL

    Netherlands

    5

    it was a quick turnaround and exactly what I needed to hear. thank you so much! we'll definitely work with you again

    $100-$200

    Price

    4 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • E
    image-docs

    exeilcynal

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    I have an idea for a story I want to tell and this madlad went above and beyond to critique my work! I'd trust him to teach my dog to drive 🐝

    $100-$200

    Price

    10 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • M

    michaelmiles467

    IM

    Isle of Man

    4.7

    Victor took the time to really understand my story and what I wanted from it and really helped with some excellent narrative suggestions that will really help me polish up my stories significantly. I really appreciate his input, was very much worth the price.

    $100-$200

    Price

    8 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No