I will be your science fiction or fantasy developmental editor
Professional storyteller for hire!
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About this Gig
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Are you part of the way through writing a speculative fiction novel?
Consider hiring me as your developmental editor to give you thoughtful feedback and suggestions before you've written yourself into a corner or even to help you write your way out.
As a full-time independent writer and editor who's worked on hundreds on projects, both my own and for commission, I know what it's like to write "by the seat of your pants" and end up in unexpected places. Take advantage of my hard-won experience and knowledge of writing craft by sending me a message about your project.
Together we'll find the secret ingredient your story is missing.
Quick General Feedback: Are you looking to get some general feedback in a timely manner? I'll make big picture suggestions and provide my impressions about the overall narrative.
Work in Progress: If you have disconnected scenes and a vague plan but hit some difficulty, then I'll help you cut out what isn't working and plot a solution.
Novel Structural Edit: I will provide a general critique of your manuscript, identifying areas for improvement when it comes to world-building, character development, writing style, and the overall plot.
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FAQ
Could I get your opinion on a writing outline?
Yes, I'm available to assess the strengths and weaknesses of your planned outline. Please send a message first so I have a better sense of how I can help you.
Will you work on projects that are not Fantasy or Science Fiction?
It's important to find the best fit between a writer and an editor. I prefer epic, action-packed stories with lots of world-building and memorable characters. If that description fits your story then I may be able to help you. Either way, feel free to send a message detailing what you have in mind.
Do you have any advice on self-publishing?
Yes, I'm very much a part of the independent author community. I'm familiar with common tropes, genre conventions, reader expectations, niche subgenres, and new developments in self-publishing. Conversely, if you're looking to publish traditionally, I might not be the best match for you.
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B bragiecon

Germany
Victor gave thoughtful and helpful feedback on my story. Thanks.
$100-$200
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11 days
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vtorres184

United States
Great work.
$50-$100
Price
7 days
Duration
Helpful?S 
slavetotheframe

Netherlands
it was a quick turnaround and exactly what I needed to hear. thank you so much! we'll definitely work with you again
$100-$200
Price
4 days
Duration
Helpful?E 
exeilcynal
Repeat Client

United States
I have an idea for a story I want to tell and this madlad went above and beyond to critique my work! I'd trust him to teach my dog to drive 🐝
$100-$200
Price
10 days
Duration
Helpful?M michaelmiles467

Isle of Man
Victor took the time to really understand my story and what I wanted from it and really helped with some excellent narrative suggestions that will really help me polish up my stories significantly. I really appreciate his input, was very much worth the price.
$100-$200
Price
8 days
Duration
Helpful?
15 reviews for this Gig
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Rating Breakdown
- Seller communication level
- Quality of delivery
- Value of delivery
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B bragiecon

Germany
Victor gave thoughtful and helpful feedback on my story. Thanks.
$100-$200
Price
11 days
Duration
Helpful?V 
vtorres184

United States
Great work.
$50-$100
Price
7 days
Duration
Helpful?S 
slavetotheframe

Netherlands
it was a quick turnaround and exactly what I needed to hear. thank you so much! we'll definitely work with you again
$100-$200
Price
4 days
Duration
Helpful?E 
exeilcynal
Repeat Client

United States
I have an idea for a story I want to tell and this madlad went above and beyond to critique my work! I'd trust him to teach my dog to drive 🐝
$100-$200
Price
10 days
Duration
Helpful?M michaelmiles467

Isle of Man
Victor took the time to really understand my story and what I wanted from it and really helped with some excellent narrative suggestions that will really help me polish up my stories significantly. I really appreciate his input, was very much worth the price.
$100-$200
Price
8 days
Duration
Helpful?

