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I will beta read your fantasy, romance, historical, dark, thriller or erotica book
Gig Summary
Hello! My name is Vivian Ayumi and I am currently a Medical student, former English teacher and avid reader with a passion for diving deep into stories. I’m here to provide honest, constructive feedb...
Level 2
Has met high performance criteria and has a proven track record for meeting client expectations.
What people loved about this freelancer
environmolds
United States
Vivian provided an extremely thoughtful and detailed beta reader analysis for my literary novella, *The Marsh Bell*. What impressed me most was not only the...
rhuizaro
Mexico
Time and time again, Vivian has proven her work is the best. She is helping me find the small details I might otherwise overlook, enabling me to iron out any...
adamagito
Netherlands
Vivian delivered exactly what I was hoping for from a beta read. She actually read the entire manuscript carefully and it shows — her report references specific...
baileybai
Canada
Vivian was incredibly thorough, thoughtful, and detail-oriented throughout the entire beta reading process. Her feedback was clear, constructive, and gave me...
joshuareynolds2
United States
Wow! Just wow. So I put in a request just under a week ago. She had to read some 30,000 words and got it done under the delivery time. Now let's move onto the...
About this Gig
Orders are open! Please, DM me and I will send you my reports structure!
NO AI USED! 100%-vetted, detailed structural analysis!
I'm a passionate reader and experienced beta reader specializing in romance, dark, fantasy, thriller, historical, supernatural, isekai, LitRPG and erotica stories. I know how readers feel, what keeps them turning pages, and what makes them put a book down.
My goal is to deliver an honest report about the reading experience, find inconsistencies and give you suggestions on how to fix them.
I offer detailed, honest, and emotionally grounded feedback to help you improve:
- Plot and Structure
- Pacing
- Readability
- Character development
- Emotional Depth
- Plot holes and Inconsistencies (+suggestions)
- Overall feedback
- Q&A
What you'll receive - A clear, organized feedback report (PDF)
My feedback is honest, respectful, and constructive. I'm here to help you shape your manuscript into its best version, whether it's a spicy romance or a deep emotional fantasy.
Let's make your story shine!
Language:
English
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Portuguese
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
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FAQ
Which format shoud I send my manuscript?
Preferably Word or docx.
Do you write in-line comments?
Unfortunately, I don’t work with in-line commentary anymore. I provide the in-depth analysis by writing you a report.
What is the length of the report I will receive?
It depends on the length of your manuscript. But here’s a simplified preview: - Simple package (up to 10,000 words manuscripts): around 4-5 pages - Intermediate package: (up to 50,000 words manuscripts) around 6-7 pages - Premium package (up to 100,000 words manuscripts): around 9-10 pages
Is my manuscript safe with you?
Absolutely! I will not share, by any means, your manuscript with anyone.
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262 reviews for this Gig
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S shawncrump
United States
Vivian carefully read my manuscript, and showed in her review that she understood the details of the story. She shared her reading experience honestly, and it was it will help me polish the final product. She was warm and easy to work with. She was supportive and complimentary, but also provided some...
$100-$200
Price
3 days
Duration
Helpful?P 
paula_sadowska
Germany
Vivian did an exceptional work reviewing my manuscript. Her extensive, 11(!)-pages long reader report caught on many details that other beta readers didn't notice. She understood genre, story and invested herself emotionally with the characters. She left a lot a constructive criticism on how I can polish...
$100-$200
Price
7 days
Duration
Helpful?I idaers
Norway
I had a blast working with this Beta reader. Her feedback was well received and she gave me a clear path to how I could: 1. See it from a new perspective. 2. Fix pacing issues. 3. Where my writing could improve. She also said many lovely things that made me very happy, like with how she saw my characters,...
$100-$200
Price
9 days
Duration
Helpful?M 
miriamjeon
United States
Vivian is great! She is personable and her report covers the full range of everything that's important in a beta read. There is both encouragement on what works and feedback on points that need fixing or tweaking. I appreciated that she caught an inconsistency that was missed between drafts, which can...
$100-$200
Price
8 days
Duration
Helpful?K 
karissaleelee
United States
I purchased several beta reading gigs in the last week and hers was one of the most detailed and thorough response. She had multiple points of consideration, but was very encouraging overall and gave me a few things to edit to make my first 50 pages more memorable!
$50
Price
5 days
Duration
Helpful?
Reviews
262 reviews for this Gig
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S shawncrump
United States
Vivian carefully read my manuscript, and showed in her review that she understood the details of the story. She shared her reading experience honestly, and it was it will help me polish the final product. She was warm and easy to work with. She was supportive and complimentary, but also provided some...
$100-$200
Price
3 days
Duration
Helpful?P paula_sadowska
Germany
Vivian did an exceptional work reviewing my manuscript. Her extensive, 11(!)-pages long reader report caught on many details that other beta readers didn't notice. She understood genre, story and invested herself emotionally with the characters. She left a lot a constructive criticism on how I can polish...
$100-$200
Price
7 days
Duration
Helpful?I idaers
Norway
I had a blast working with this Beta reader. Her feedback was well received and she gave me a clear path to how I could: 1. See it from a new perspective. 2. Fix pacing issues. 3. Where my writing could improve. She also said many lovely things that made me very happy, like with how she saw my characters,...
$100-$200
Price
9 days
Duration
Helpful?M miriamjeon
United States
Vivian is great! She is personable and her report covers the full range of everything that's important in a beta read. There is both encouragement on what works and feedback on points that need fixing or tweaking. I appreciated that she caught an inconsistency that was missed between drafts, which can...
$100-$200
Price
8 days
Duration
Helpful?K karissaleelee
United States
I purchased several beta reading gigs in the last week and hers was one of the most detailed and thorough response. She had multiple points of consideration, but was very encouraging overall and gave me a few things to edit to make my first 50 pages more memorable!
$50
Price
5 days
Duration
Helpful?
