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I will beta read your fantasy, romance, historical, dark, thriller or erotica book
Gig Summary
Hello! My name is Vivian Ayumi and I am currently a Medical student, former English teacher and avid reader with a passion for diving deep into stories. I’m here to provide honest, constructive feedb...
Level 2
Has met high performance criteria and has a proven track record for meeting client expectations.
What people loved about this freelancer
environmolds
United States
Vivian provided an extremely thoughtful and detailed beta reader analysis for my literary novella, *The Marsh Bell*. What impressed me most was not only the...
rhuizaro
Mexico
Time and time again, Vivian has proven her work is the best. She is helping me find the small details I might otherwise overlook, enabling me to iron out any...
adamagito
Netherlands
Vivian delivered exactly what I was hoping for from a beta read. She actually read the entire manuscript carefully and it shows — her report references specific...
baileybai
Canada
Vivian was incredibly thorough, thoughtful, and detail-oriented throughout the entire beta reading process. Her feedback was clear, constructive, and gave me...
joshuareynolds2
United States
Wow! Just wow. So I put in a request just under a week ago. She had to read some 30,000 words and got it done under the delivery time. Now let's move onto the...
About this Gig
Orders are open! Please, DM me and I will send you my reports structure!
NO AI USED! 100%-vetted, detailed structural analysis!
I'm a passionate reader and experienced beta reader specializing in romance, dark, fantasy, thriller, historical, supernatural, isekai, LitRPG and erotica stories. I know how readers feel, what keeps them turning pages, and what makes them put a book down.
My goal is to deliver an honest report about the reading experience, find inconsistencies and give you suggestions on how to fix them.
I offer detailed, honest, and emotionally grounded feedback to help you improve:
- Plot and Structure
- Pacing
- Readability
- Character development
- Emotional Depth
- Plot holes and Inconsistencies (+suggestions)
- Overall feedback
- Q&A
What you'll receive:
- A clear, organized feedback report (PDF)
- Summary of whats working and what needs polishing
My feedback is honest, respectful, and constructive. I'm here to help you shape your manuscript into its best version, whether it's a spicy romance or a deep emotional fantasy.
Let's make your story shine!
Language:
English
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Portuguese
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
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FAQ
Which format shoud I send my manuscript?
Preferably Word or PDF, but I accept other formats too.
Do you write in-line comments?
Unfortunately, I don’t work with in-line commentary anymore. I provide the in-depth analysis by writing you a report.
What is the length of the report I will receive?
It depends on the length of your manuscript. But here’s a simplified preview: - Simple package (up to 5,000 words manuscripts): around 4-5 pages - Intermediate package: (up to 50,000 words manuscripts) around 6-7 pages - Premium package (up to 100,000 words manuscripts): around 9-10 pages
Is my manuscript safe with you?
Absolutely! I will not share, by any means, your manuscript with anyone.
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K k_mzammit
United Kingdom
Vivian is a fantastic beta-reader. My original experience on Fiverr left me really skeptical, but working with Vivian really was my redemption arc. She went above and beyond for her report and was really complimentary on what I had written. I could not suggest Vivian more.
$50-$100
Price
5 days
Duration
Helpful?B brandynordick
Canada
Vivian’s feedback was incredibly detailed, honest, and constructive. She highlighted what worked well and what were her favorite parts of the novel, and why, which gave me confidence to keep writing. It was clear she read every chapter with care. Her comments on character development, pacing, dialogue,...
$100-$200
Price
7 days
Duration
Helpful?A alannaroselynch
United States
Vivian went above and beyond with her feedback on my novel. I knew I was asking a lot with a book over 170,000 words, but Vivian met the challenge and then some! Her attention to detail over so much text over a relatively short period of time amazed me. She pointed out phrases I had overused and moments...
$200-$400
Price
2 weeks
Duration
Helpful?P 
paigemcvicker
United States
Vivian was the first reader I ever had for my debut novel and she made me feel right at home reviewing my work. She is eloquent and enjoyed the read. Her critique of pacing and emotional depth was much needed. Also her comments on my 3 act structure was soooo neccesary. I can breath easy now and go into my next edit a happy girl.
$100-$200
Price
7 days
Duration
Helpful?J 
jordanwright96
United Kingdom
Unbelievably detailed analysis and feedback. Vivian is exceptionally proficient in noticing and analysing pacing, and in highlighting areas of the prose that may need tweaking. She explained her reasoning and was just as quick to point out what works as well as what might not work as well. I particularly...
$50-$100
Price
5 days
Duration
Helpful?
Reviews
161 reviews for this Gig
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K k_mzammit
United Kingdom
Vivian is a fantastic beta-reader. My original experience on Fiverr left me really skeptical, but working with Vivian really was my redemption arc. She went above and beyond for her report and was really complimentary on what I had written. I could not suggest Vivian more.
$50-$100
Price
5 days
Duration
Helpful?B brandynordick
Canada
Vivian’s feedback was incredibly detailed, honest, and constructive. She highlighted what worked well and what were her favorite parts of the novel, and why, which gave me confidence to keep writing. It was clear she read every chapter with care. Her comments on character development, pacing, dialogue,...
$100-$200
Price
7 days
Duration
Helpful?A alannaroselynch
United States
Vivian went above and beyond with her feedback on my novel. I knew I was asking a lot with a book over 170,000 words, but Vivian met the challenge and then some! Her attention to detail over so much text over a relatively short period of time amazed me. She pointed out phrases I had overused and moments...
$200-$400
Price
2 weeks
Duration
Helpful?P paigemcvicker
United States
Vivian was the first reader I ever had for my debut novel and she made me feel right at home reviewing my work. She is eloquent and enjoyed the read. Her critique of pacing and emotional depth was much needed. Also her comments on my 3 act structure was soooo neccesary. I can breath easy now and go into my next edit a happy girl.
$100-$200
Price
7 days
Duration
Helpful?J jordanwright96
United Kingdom
Unbelievably detailed analysis and feedback. Vivian is exceptionally proficient in noticing and analysing pacing, and in highlighting areas of the prose that may need tweaking. She explained her reasoning and was just as quick to point out what works as well as what might not work as well. I particularly...
$50-$100
Price
5 days
Duration
Helpful?
