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I will beta read your fantasy, romance, historical, dark, thriller or erotica book
Gig Summary
Hello! My name is Vivian Ayumi and I am currently a Medical student, former English teacher and avid reader with a passion for diving deep into stories. I’m here to provide honest, constructive feedb...
Level 2
Has met high performance criteria and has a proven track record for meeting client expectations.
What people loved about this freelancer
environmolds
United States
Vivian provided an extremely thoughtful and detailed beta reader analysis for my literary novella, *The Marsh Bell*. What impressed me most was not only the...
rhuizaro
Mexico
Time and time again, Vivian has proven her work is the best. She is helping me find the small details I might otherwise overlook, enabling me to iron out any...
adamagito
Netherlands
Vivian delivered exactly what I was hoping for from a beta read. She actually read the entire manuscript carefully and it shows — her report references specific...
baileybai
Canada
Vivian was incredibly thorough, thoughtful, and detail-oriented throughout the entire beta reading process. Her feedback was clear, constructive, and gave me...
joshuareynolds2
United States
Wow! Just wow. So I put in a request just under a week ago. She had to read some 30,000 words and got it done under the delivery time. Now let's move onto the...
About this Gig
Orders are open! Please, DM me and I will send you my reports structure!
NO AI USED! 100%-vetted, detailed structural analysis!
I'm a passionate reader and experienced beta reader specializing in romance, dark, fantasy, thriller, historical, supernatural, isekai, LitRPG and erotica stories. I know how readers feel, what keeps them turning pages, and what makes them put a book down.
My goal is to deliver an honest report about the reading experience, find inconsistencies and give you suggestions on how to fix them.
I offer detailed, honest, and emotionally grounded feedback to help you improve:
- Plot and Structure
- Pacing
- Readability
- Character development
- Emotional Depth
- Plot holes and Inconsistencies (+suggestions)
- Overall feedback
- Q&A
What you'll receive:
- A clear, organized feedback report (PDF)
- Summary of whats working and what needs polishing
My feedback is honest, respectful, and constructive. I'm here to help you shape your manuscript into its best version, whether it's a spicy romance or a deep emotional fantasy.
Let's make your story shine!
Language:
English
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Portuguese
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
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FAQ
Which format shoud I send my manuscript?
Preferably Word or PDF, but I accept other formats too.
Do you write in-line comments?
Unfortunately, I don’t work with in-line commentary anymore. I provide the in-depth analysis by writing you a report.
What is the length of the report I will receive?
It depends on the length of your manuscript. But here’s a simplified preview: - Simple package (up to 5,000 words manuscripts): around 4-5 pages - Intermediate package: (up to 50,000 words manuscripts) around 6-7 pages - Premium package (up to 100,000 words manuscripts): around 9-10 pages
Is my manuscript safe with you?
Absolutely! I will not share, by any means, your manuscript with anyone.
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melkaven
United States
Read my whole book in just a few days, no AI use, wrote a very thorough report at length. She seemed to catch a few things that I didnt even think a reader would catch. My primary intent was to try to figure out what a reader could figure out based on book 1 clues and she got almost all of them, a bit...
$100-$200
Price
7 days
Duration
Helpful?K kaypro1221
United States
Ongoing collaborationVivian really read the book closely. She beta read my 170,000 word novel in four separate arcs and not once did I get the sense that she skimmed or jumped ahead. She noted strengths and weaknesses as was not shy to point out issues. She is one of those readers that reads with emotion but also gives the...
$50-$100
Price
5 days
Duration
Helpful?E elle_myren
United States
Vivian found little things in my story that won't take readers out of it but could cause some detail-oriented readers to feel frustrated. She also gave me great advice on how to help the pacing of my slow-burn romance hit the best without losing that core part of the relationship. Really loved her thoughts...
$100-$200
Price
7 days
Duration
Helpful?A adri_writer
United States
Vivian gave me an incredibly thoughtful, detailed beta read. She clearly understood the heart of my story, including why the fast-burn romance works, and her feedback was both encouraging and specific. She highlighted the emotional moments that landed strongest while also pointing out pacing, continuity,...
$100-$200
Price
6 days
Duration
Helpful?J 
jo_wu_author
United States
Vivian is absolutely amazing to work with! I had her read my 21k-word fantasy novella, and in 4 days she delivered a wonderful 6-page report with detailed feedback of what she enjoyed and areas for improvement. Her enthusiasm, kindness, and responsiveness is outstanding, and I will definitely think of her for future projects.
$50
Price
6 days
Duration
Helpful?
Reviews
213 reviews for this Gig
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M melkaven
United States
Read my whole book in just a few days, no AI use, wrote a very thorough report at length. She seemed to catch a few things that I didnt even think a reader would catch. My primary intent was to try to figure out what a reader could figure out based on book 1 clues and she got almost all of them, a bit...
$100-$200
Price
7 days
Duration
Helpful?K kaypro1221
United States
Ongoing collaborationVivian really read the book closely. She beta read my 170,000 word novel in four separate arcs and not once did I get the sense that she skimmed or jumped ahead. She noted strengths and weaknesses as was not shy to point out issues. She is one of those readers that reads with emotion but also gives the...
$50-$100
Price
5 days
Duration
Helpful?E elle_myren
United States
Vivian found little things in my story that won't take readers out of it but could cause some detail-oriented readers to feel frustrated. She also gave me great advice on how to help the pacing of my slow-burn romance hit the best without losing that core part of the relationship. Really loved her thoughts...
$100-$200
Price
7 days
Duration
Helpful?A adri_writer
United States
Vivian gave me an incredibly thoughtful, detailed beta read. She clearly understood the heart of my story, including why the fast-burn romance works, and her feedback was both encouraging and specific. She highlighted the emotional moments that landed strongest while also pointing out pacing, continuity,...
$100-$200
Price
6 days
Duration
Helpful?J jo_wu_author
United States
Vivian is absolutely amazing to work with! I had her read my 21k-word fantasy novella, and in 4 days she delivered a wonderful 6-page report with detailed feedback of what she enjoyed and areas for improvement. Her enthusiasm, kindness, and responsiveness is outstanding, and I will definitely think of her for future projects.
$50
Price
6 days
Duration
Helpful?
