I will edit your fantasy or science fiction novel

5.0
5.0

United States

I speak English

279 orders completed

I have a BA in Literature/Creative Writing. Since the summer I found my mom’s romance stash in the garage, I have devoured the written word. Through the years I have called myself many things career...

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About this Gig

Have you completed your manuscript? Are you wondering whether it's any good? Or if it could be better?


I have spent the last ten years with a single passion: to help stories come alive in the most comprehensive way possible. The first draft is just the beginning of your story's journey and I am excited to help along the way.


Once you send me your manuscript in Word, I will add in-line comments reflecting any questions/comments I have about character, story structure, plot, and world development. With the proofreading option, I will read the MS a second time and work my way through in-depth line edits regarding sentence structure, spelling, and grammar.

Lastly, I will provide a Readers Response that addresses some/all of the following:


-When did the story hook me?

-Review of each character and their development

-My favorite part?

-Three of my biggest questions.

-Pacing and tone

-Suggestions on story parts that should be rewritten or looked more at more closely

-Was the ending strong?

-Is the book ready, or does it need another look?


As an avid reader and editor, this is what I love to do. This is not a hassle or a project to rush through, and I am excited to read your story!

Language:

English

Genre:

Horror/ thriller

Mystery

Romance

Science fiction

Fantasy

Style guide:

APA

MLA

Chicago Manual of Style (CMOS)

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Reviews

38 reviews for this Gig
5.0

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Rating Breakdown
  • Seller communication level
    5
  • Quality of delivery
    5
  • Value of delivery
    4.9
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    cperezpla

    US

    United States

    5

    This is my first manuscript and I really wanted to work with someone who has experience and would be able to provide me with guidance. Vallie has been so incredible in how she communicates, the deliverables she provides, etc. I really appreciate all of her feedback and look forward to continuing to grow as a writer with her help!

    $1,000-$1,500

    Price

    3 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • P

    pedroqueirog604

    Repeat Client

    AU

    Australia

    5

    Val exceeded my expectations. She carefully reviewed my query letter and synopsis, taking all my notes into account and significantly improving clarity, structure, and impact. Her attention to detail and understanding of the publishing market were evident throughout. Communication was smooth, professional,...

    Up to $50

    Price

    8 days

    Duration

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    zetapotential

    AU

    Australia

    5

    Vallie delivers! Ahead of time, deep and thorough copy edit with constructive and well developed comments coming from deep experience. I will also be using her on future copy edits. she highlighted several key points that needed work, all of which make the book much much better.

    $800-$1,000

    Price

    9 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • F

    furkatakasimov

    FR

    France

    5

    Thank you for very detailed feedback and suggestions.

    $200-$400

    Price

    11 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
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    cheyenneblack_

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    Thank you for your skill and dedication as always!! I appreciate you so much!

    $50-$100

    Price

    2 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
Reviews

38 reviews for this Gig
5.0

(36)
(2)
(0)
(0)
(0)
Rating Breakdown
  • Seller communication level
    5
  • Quality of delivery
    5
  • Value of delivery
    4.9
Sort By
Most relevant
  • C

    cperezpla

    US

    United States

    5

    This is my first manuscript and I really wanted to work with someone who has experience and would be able to provide me with guidance. Vallie has been so incredible in how she communicates, the deliverables she provides, etc. I really appreciate all of her feedback and look forward to continuing to grow as a writer with her help!

    $1,000-$1,500

    Price

    3 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • P

    pedroqueirog604

    Repeat Client

    AU

    Australia

    5

    Val exceeded my expectations. She carefully reviewed my query letter and synopsis, taking all my notes into account and significantly improving clarity, structure, and impact. Her attention to detail and understanding of the publishing market were evident throughout. Communication was smooth, professional,...

    Up to $50

    Price

    8 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • Z

    zetapotential

    AU

    Australia

    5

    Vallie delivers! Ahead of time, deep and thorough copy edit with constructive and well developed comments coming from deep experience. I will also be using her on future copy edits. she highlighted several key points that needed work, all of which make the book much much better.

    $800-$1,000

    Price

    9 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • F

    furkatakasimov

    FR

    France

    5

    Thank you for very detailed feedback and suggestions.

    $200-$400

    Price

    11 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • C
    image-docs

    cheyenneblack_

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    Thank you for your skill and dedication as always!! I appreciate you so much!

    $50-$100

    Price

    2 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No