I will edit your romance novel

4.9
4.9

United States

I speak English

272 orders completed

I have a BA in Literature/Creative Writing. Since the summer I found my mom’s romance stash in the garage, I have devoured the written word. Through the years I have called myself many things career...

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About this Gig

Have you completed your romance novel? Have you re-read it so many times the words blur together and you can't tell a semi-colon from a comma?


Look no further! With ten years of passion and experience in helping stories come alive, I am eager to join you on your story's journey.


Once you send me your manuscript in Word, I will provide in-line comments addressing character development, story structure, plot, and world-building. In addition, with the comprehensive edit option, I will conduct a thorough line edit for sentence structure, spelling, and grammar.


To top it off, I will provide a Reader's Reaction that covers critical aspects such as the hook of the story, character development, favorite parts, pacing, tone, three significant questions I have, suggestions for parts that require revision, and a review of the ending.


As an enthusiastic reader and editor, I thoroughly enjoy assisting writers in honing their craft. This is not a project to rush through, but rather an opportunity to dive into your story and help it shine.

So, send your manuscript my way, and let's make your story the best it can be!

Language:

English

Genre:

Adventure

Horror/ thriller

Mystery

Romance

Science fiction

Style guide:

APA

MLA

Chicago Manual of Style (CMOS)

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149 reviews for this Gig
4.9

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Rating Breakdown
  • Seller communication level
    5
  • Quality of delivery
    4.9
  • Value of delivery
    4.9
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    pedroqueirog604

    Repeat Client

    AU

    Australia

    5

    Vallie was amazing to work with. She improved the flow of the story a lot, especially with transitions and consistency. She was also very patient with me, which I really appreciated since I’m still new to this. Communication was clear and easy the whole time. You can tell she really cares about the...

    $600-$800

    Price

    2 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
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    cheyenneblack_

    US

    United States

    5

    My abundant appreciation for the craft, skill, time, and dedication Val invested in my manuscript. Her feedback and support is of immense value. I am so grateful for her service and expertise. Thank you so much for holding my manuscript with such care and intention! Your suggestions and insight only...

    $1,000-$1,500

    Price

    2 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
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    ellenstozer

    Repeat Client

    GB

    United Kingdom

    4.3

    Third time working with Vallie and she always delivers! She makes my books so much better and will continue to use her in the future.

    $1,000-$1,500

    Price

    10 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • J

    josephine_jor

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    This was my second time working with Vallie, and I'm so pleased with her services! Truly great to work with. Love her style. Really hope she continues to be available, because she's just wonderful. Her feedback was incredibly helpful.

    $400-$600

    Price

    3 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • A
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    adobsf

    CA

    Canada

    4.7

    This was my first time working with an editor for my debut manuscript, and as a first rough draft, I wanted to get a sense of what was working and where I could make improvements to elevate my story. Vallie delivered a comprehensive reader report that did exactly that. She was diligent, professional,...

    $200-$400

    Price

    3 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
Reviews

149 reviews for this Gig
4.9

(142)
(6)
(1)
(0)
(0)
Rating Breakdown
  • Seller communication level
    5
  • Quality of delivery
    4.9
  • Value of delivery
    4.9
Sort By
Most relevant
  • P

    pedroqueirog604

    Repeat Client

    AU

    Australia

    5

    Vallie was amazing to work with. She improved the flow of the story a lot, especially with transitions and consistency. She was also very patient with me, which I really appreciated since I’m still new to this. Communication was clear and easy the whole time. You can tell she really cares about the...

    $600-$800

    Price

    2 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • C
    image-docs

    cheyenneblack_

    US

    United States

    5

    My abundant appreciation for the craft, skill, time, and dedication Val invested in my manuscript. Her feedback and support is of immense value. I am so grateful for her service and expertise. Thank you so much for holding my manuscript with such care and intention! Your suggestions and insight only...

    $1,000-$1,500

    Price

    2 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • E
    image-docs

    ellenstozer

    Repeat Client

    GB

    United Kingdom

    4.3

    Third time working with Vallie and she always delivers! She makes my books so much better and will continue to use her in the future.

    $1,000-$1,500

    Price

    10 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • J

    josephine_jor

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    This was my second time working with Vallie, and I'm so pleased with her services! Truly great to work with. Love her style. Really hope she continues to be available, because she's just wonderful. Her feedback was incredibly helpful.

    $400-$600

    Price

    3 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • A
    image-docs

    adobsf

    CA

    Canada

    4.7

    This was my first time working with an editor for my debut manuscript, and as a first rough draft, I wanted to get a sense of what was working and where I could make improvements to elevate my story. Vallie delivered a comprehensive reader report that did exactly that. She was diligent, professional,...

    $200-$400

    Price

    3 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No