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I will provide an agent query critique
Published author, linguist, and professional editor
An experienced publishing expert of over 25 years, with a PhD in Linguistics from the USA. I help authors succeed on their publishing journey with expert beta reading, editing, and coaching. I am also...
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Book Editing
About this Gig
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Put your agent query package in the best possible shape! I am an agented, best-selling author with multiple Kirkus-starred reviews, and over 25 years editorial experience, helping other writers finesse their output, to stand the best chance of securing an agent.
Based on my extensive international publishing success and experience, I will critique your agent submission package, providing a reader report on:
- Query letter (includes re-writing/line-editing)
- Synopsis (includes re-writing/line-editing)
- First three chapters (re-writing/line-editing, included in Standard Package)
- Detailed reader report (15+ pages) on the entire work (included in the Premium Package)
I will provide a constructive, discerning reader report, with my overall assessment on your package. My report will also include specific feedback on:
- Writing style
- Plot and any obvious plot holes/inconsistencies (for works of fiction)
- Character, voice and consistency (for works of fiction)
- Structure, pacing and development
- Accessibility and presentation of the science (for works of popular science)
I am a published popular science and fiction writer and cater to all fiction genres, as well as works of popular science.
Language:
English
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
Clients I’ve worked with
Samsung
Electrical Engineering
Nationwide project launched by Samsung to document a new digital dictionary of self-expression. Campaign aimed to curate the lexicon of human expression – led by Vyvyan Evans, PHD and Professor of Linguistics.
Mar 2022-Dec 2022
FAQ
What type of file do you require?
I can work with either a Word or PDF file. Unfortunately, I’m unable to work with cloud-sharing platforms such as Google Docs.
Do you use AI?
I do not use AI in any way. I am the only person reading your work and writing the reader report. My expertise and experience is what you are paying for. And that is what you will get!
What's your process in reading my work and preparing your report?
Depending on the package selected, I will aim to read your piece in one (or more) sittings over consecutive days, compiling comments and reactions as I go. After reading, I spend several hours reviewing my comments and preparing the edits and report. I usually work on one project at a time.
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Vyv is very knowledgeable and helpful when it comes to publishing and has a great eye for writing. I have appreciated his help with my project. He is new on Fiverr but 100% worth the investment. You can tell he cares a lot about what he does. Thanks for all your help!
$100-$200
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2 days
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Helpful?V vaughnkness
United States
It was a pleasure working with Vyvyan. My manuscript was replied to with promptness and professionalism, an insane amount of attention to detail, and a thoroughness that I believe will benefit me for long to come. thanks so much!
$400-$600
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2 weeks
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C claireszewcz586
Repeat Client
United States
Vyv is very knowledgeable and helpful when it comes to publishing and has a great eye for writing. I have appreciated his help with my project. He is new on Fiverr but 100% worth the investment. You can tell he cares a lot about what he does. Thanks for all your help!
$100-$200
Price
2 days
Duration
Helpful?V vaughnkness
United States
It was a pleasure working with Vyvyan. My manuscript was replied to with promptness and professionalism, an insane amount of attention to detail, and a thoroughness that I believe will benefit me for long to come. thanks so much!
$400-$600
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2 weeks
Duration
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