I will provide developmental editing for your fiction manuscript

I provide developmental editing for fiction manuscripts, focusing on the big-picture elements that make a story work.

I'll read your manuscript from beginning to end and provide detailed feedback on areas such as:

• Plot, structure, and pacing
• Character development and arcs
• Character motivation and consistency
• Conflict and stakes
• Relationships and chemistry
• Plot holes
• World-building
• Emotional impact and overall reader experience

My goal is to help you strengthen your story while preserving your individual voice. I won't rewrite your manuscript into something else. I'll help make your story stronger.

Your order includes a detailed editorial report outlining my feedback and revision suggestions.

Please note: This is a developmental edit, not a copyedit/proofread. Grammar, punctuation, spelling, and sentence-level corrections are not included.

If you'd like direct comments, including areas I think work very well, throughout your manuscript, you can add the Annotated Manuscript extra.

I specialize in adult and YA fiction, particularly romance, romantasy, LGBTQIA+, and erotica.

Over 90,000 words, or want to know if your story is a good fit? Please message me before ordering.