I will be your ya fantasy or eco fantasy with comprehensive developmental feedback

I would be happy to read your young adult fantasy or eco-fantasy novel carefully and provide you with feedback that will help your novel evolve.

What I can provide:

Readers report with general impressions and main ideas

Comments on the plot, pace, story structure and flow

Feedback on characters, their interactions and motivations

Thoughts on world building, magic system, setting

Comments on themes, stakes, emotional engagement, ending

For eco-fantasy consideration of how natural and environmental themes work in the story

Optional comments right in the text, to highlight confusing, slow parts and especially interesting ones

I will point out both strengths and things that need further work, providing you with constructive suggestions you will find useful. I will not rephrase your work or impose my style on you my aim is to let you see your work through a readers eyes.

kindly, message me before ordering to clarify the number of words in your book, its genre and kind of feedback you expect from me.