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I will beta read ya memoir or wlw and give reader feedback
About this Gig
Looking for honest feedback on your YA novel, memoir, or wlw/sapphic romance? I'll read your manuscript as a genuine reader and give clear, constructive feedback on what's working and what isn't before you publish, query, or send it to an editor.
I'll focus on pacing, character connection, and emotional impact whether your story keeps readers hooked from start to finish. For memoirs, I look at narrative flow and honesty. For YA and wlw romance, I pay attention to voice, chemistry, and genre expectations.
You'll receive a written reader report covering overall impressions, strengths, and areas to improve no empty praise, no harshness, just real reader reactions.
Send me your manuscript and a bit about your story, and let's get started.
Language:
English
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Spanish
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Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
What genres do you read?
YA (Young Adult) fiction, memoirs, and wlw/sapphic romance. Message me first if your book falls outside these but you think it's still a fit.
Will you fix my grammar and spelling?
No this gig is for reader-perspective feedback (story, pacing, characters, emotional impact), not line editing. I'll flag anything glaring, but grammar isn't the focus here.
Do you need the full manuscript, or can I send an excerpt?
Either works. Full manuscripts get the deepest feedback; excerpts (first chapters) are great for early direction before you've finished your draft.
What format should I send my manuscript in?
Word document (.docx) or Google Doc with comment access — this lets me leave notes directly in your file.
How is beta reading different for a memoir vs. fiction?
For memoirs, I focus on narrative flow, honesty, and whether your story connects emotionally with readers not plot in the fictional sense. For YA and wlw romance, I focus on voice, pacing, character chemistry, and genre expectations.
Is my manuscript safe with you?
Yes. I don't share, copy, or use your work anywhere else. It stays strictly between us.
I don't have reviews yet why should I trust you?
Fair question. Being new means you're getting genuine focus and care on early orders while I build my reputation not a rushed job squeezed between dozens of other clients.
Can I request specific things to focus on?
Absolutely tell me your concerns (e.g. "does the pacing drag in the middle?" or "does the romance feel believable?") and I'll prioritize those in my report.
