I will beta read, critique, and provide detailed, constructive feedback on your book

Nigeria

I speak English, Spanish, French

64 orders completed

Professional Book Editor, Formatter and KDP Publishing Specialist

Your manuscript deserves more than good enough. I am Christine Ollis, a professional book editor, formatter, with 8 years of experience in book editing, book formatting, and beta reading, I help first...

Level 1

Has met certain performance criteria and shows strong potential in the marketplace.

About this Gig

Looking for honest, detailed feedback that will help your story reach its full potential? You're in the right place.

I'm a passionate beta reader who genuinely loves getting lost in a good book.

I read widely: fantasy, sci-fi, romance, thriller, literary fiction, young adult, non-fiction, and yours.


No AI used, ever.


While reading, I'm constantly checking in with myself: 

Is the pacing pulling me forward or dragging? 

Does this dialogue feel natural? 

Am I invested in this character? 

Would a reader be confused here?


I focus on:

Plot and structure

Pacing and tension

Character development

Readability and flow

Plot holes and inconsistencies


My process

I read your manuscript the way your ideal reader would, carefully and completely. I leave inline comments as I go, then compile everything into an objective feedback report covering what is working, what needs attention, and what to do next.


Who this is for

First-time authors nervous about sharing their work, self-publishing writers preparing for launch, and anyone who wants a trusted reader's perspective before their book meets the world.


Send me your word count and genre and let's talk about your writing.


Genre:

Adventure

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Horror/ thriller

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Literary fiction

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Mystery

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Romance

Language:

English

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French

Delivery style preference

Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.

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