I will beta read, critique, and provide detailed, constructive feedback on your book

United States

I speak English, Spanish, French

12 orders completed

Professional Book Editor, Formatter and KDP Publishing Specialist

Your manuscript deserves more than good enough. I am Christine Ollis, a professional book editor, formatter, with 8 years of experience in book editing, book formatting, and beta reading, I help first...
About this Gig

Looking for honest, detailed feedback that will help your story reach its full potential? You're in the right place.

I'm a passionate beta reader who genuinely loves getting lost in a good book.

I read widely: fantasy, sci-fi, romance, thriller, literary fiction, young adult, non-fiction, and yours.


No AI used, ever.


While reading, I'm constantly checking in with myself: 

Is the pacing pulling me forward or dragging? 

Does this dialogue feel natural? 

Am I invested in this character? 

Would a reader be confused here?


I focus on:

Plot and structure

Pacing and tension

Character development

Readability and flow

Plot holes and inconsistencies


My process

I read your manuscript the way your ideal reader would, carefully and completely. I leave inline comments as I go, then compile everything into an objective feedback report covering what is working, what needs attention, and what to do next.


Who this is for

First-time authors nervous about sharing their work, self-publishing writers preparing for launch, and anyone who wants a trusted reader's perspective before their book meets the world.


Send me your word count and genre and let's talk about your writing.


Genre:

Adventure

Horror/ thriller

Literary fiction

Mystery

Romance

Language:

English

French

Delivery style preference

Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.