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I will punch up the dialogue in your script
Writer, Blogger, Screenwriter, Copywriter
Writer who loves giving notes on screenplays, creating content, and sharing stories. Between you and me, I've got enough words for the both of us :)
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About this Gig
Who am I?
I'm an award-winning, repped screenwriter who's worked in Film/TV development for over 8 years working with producers behind projects including RESERVATION DOGS, OZARK, THE ACCOUNTANT, THE IRISHMAN, PET, & THOSE WHO WISH ME DEAD, while working directly with screenwriters like you to develop scripts that have won contests, been optioned, or led to signings. I've also sold 3 of my own screenplays to production companies.
What do I include in your rewrite?
Your rewrite includes detailed line-by-line edits, dialogue revisions, character arc improvement, plot work, and narrative development to bolster your script into a faster, sharper, and more entertaining story which readers won't be able to put down. In the film industry, you only get one chance to impress that perfect actor, studio, or agency. I'm here to give you the best script to ensure your project will stand out when that opportunity comes.
Success stories:
6 scripts I've rewritten earned 8s on the Blcklst (from previous scores in 4-7 range).
11 scripts I've rewritten earned Finalist placements in major contests.
7 writers I've worked with signed w/ literary managers off my drafts
WHAT I DO GETS REAL RESULTS!
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English
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FAQ
Can I still place an order if my script is over 130 pages?
If your script is over 130 pages, you can still place an order. Each 5 additional pages costs $5.
What types of scripts will you punch up?
I punch up scripts of all types. Short scripts, half hour pilots, hour pilots, and feature screenplays.
Do you specialize in any particular genre?
I can write in almost all genres. My strengths are: Comedy, Drama, Horror, Thriller, Action, Adventure, Mystery, Period/History, Romance, Western, Teen, and War. My weaknesses are: Anime, Family, Fantasy, and Science Fiction.
How does your process work?
Typically, I will read the script once over and take a short hand of thoughts along the way. Then, I go back through the script line-by-line and edit the dialogue to make it really pop! At times, I will suggest adding additional lines of dialogue. At others, I will suggest removal of certain lines.
What makes good dialogue in your opinion?
As long as dialogue fits: a) the voices of the characters b) the world of the characters - then it can be good. The key is to sharpen your dialogue so it feels real, true to the characters, and has the maximum effect on the page. Word choice, verbiage, and references are all points of interest.
Can you write better jokes for my comedy script?
Yes. Absolutely yes. I'm a very funny dialogue writer and I do it all the time!
Have you ever sold a screenplay? What makes you so special?
Yes! Twice. One in 2019 and one in 2021. I'm currently writing a movie sequel on assignment for a major studio. I'm repped by an agent and a manager at the top agencies in Hollywood. If I can do it, so can you! Let's get your script in tip top shape!
Have your dialogue punch ups ever actually benefitted anyone?
Yes. I've helped numerous writers secure representation with my punch ups. Got multiple writers 8s on the Blcklst, a dozen finalist placements in contests, and even punched up a few into contest winners. I also had a writer OPTION his script to an A-List actor's production company off my draft.
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bogieathena
United States
Pat put my script to the next level while still maintaining the original story. He delivered before the date that it was due. Would use him again.
$50-$100
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4 days
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Helpful?S shanlil
United States
I really enjoyed working with WriterPatrick - very friendly and quick to respond. I loved most his confidence when taking my script - as though no task is too great - and he certainly proved this. The product he returned truly shows his experience and talent, fixing in a few days what I was trying to get right for months! Thank you so much!
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lintontom
United Kingdom
Thank you so much! Everything was so useful. A really honest and talented writer. Has really pushed my script further and helped me see where I was going wrong with my writing. Can’t thank you enough! Will be back soon. 😄
Helpful?A anasegyan
Germany
As a non-native English speaker, I can highly recommend this seller. He doesn't rush through your work and pays attention to detail.
Helpful?M mikeprice303
United States
Yet another stellar service and more to come.
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Rating Breakdown
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B bogieathena
United States
Pat put my script to the next level while still maintaining the original story. He delivered before the date that it was due. Would use him again.
$50-$100
Price
4 days
Duration
Helpful?S shanlil
United States
I really enjoyed working with WriterPatrick - very friendly and quick to respond. I loved most his confidence when taking my script - as though no task is too great - and he certainly proved this. The product he returned truly shows his experience and talent, fixing in a few days what I was trying to get right for months! Thank you so much!
Helpful?L lintontom
United Kingdom
Thank you so much! Everything was so useful. A really honest and talented writer. Has really pushed my script further and helped me see where I was going wrong with my writing. Can’t thank you enough! Will be back soon. 😄
Helpful?A anasegyan
Germany
As a non-native English speaker, I can highly recommend this seller. He doesn't rush through your work and pays attention to detail.
Helpful?M mikeprice303
United States
Yet another stellar service and more to come.
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