I will provide a developmental and copy edit for your book

5.0
5.0

United States

I speak English

625 orders completed

Gig Summary

Editing books that impact readers beyond the final page

Hello! My name is Leilani, and I've been editing books for six+ years to help bring the stories that need telling out into the world. I'm a writer myself who graduated from UCSD with a B.A. in Literat...

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About this Gig

As a writer myself, I know firsthand how nerve-racking it can be to place your book in someone else's hands. I hope that my experience can be a comfort to you, and that my services meet the needs of your story. If you would like to receive a first chapter edit for $30, please message me as this can be a great way to see if my editing style matches what you're looking for.


This gig includes:

  1. Developmental edits: I will look at the actual content of your manuscript and provide in-line comments along with an edit letter after reading the work. This includes characterization, world-building, plot/structure, and dialogue/voice. Note: I do not write new content into the manuscript. These are given as suggestions.
  2. Copy edits: I will also provide a standard copy edit that checks for grammar, punctuation, spelling and general sentence readability. This will be done in-text via Track Changes on Microsoft Word (or Google Docs if more suitable). Pricing for this is subject to change if more line edits are needed.


Developmental and copy edits are also available individually. All genres are welcome. I offer custom pricing for any word count!


*** Please message me for availability. ***

Language:

English

Genre:

Memoir/ biography

Romance

Science fiction

Fantasy

Audience :

General readers

Teen / young adult

Adult

Delivery style preference

Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.

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403 reviews for this Gig
5.0

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Rating Breakdown
  • Seller communication level
    5
  • Quality of delivery
    5
  • Value of delivery
    4.9
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    rebecca_meghan

    US

    United States

    5

    My co-writer and I are deeply grateful to Leilani for the time she dedicated to our fantasy book. After a year of working on multiple drafts, we knew we needed an objective pair of eyes on our plot development. Leilani was able to provide us detailed suggestions on improving our pacing for traditional...

    $800-$1,000

    Price

    3 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • S

    sayge2024

    US

    United States

    Ongoing collaboration
    5

    I am so HAPPY that I chose Leilani for complete manuscript editing support. Her feedback was incredibly supportive from the position as the reader/consumer- Her suggestions on rephrasing or providing more context within the text to help the reader stay engaged and 'in it' with you, was profound and truly...

    $400-$600

    Price

    4 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • M

    missyterrell

    US

    United States

    Ongoing collaboration
    5

    Leilani was fast, professional and showed great attention to details. I am using her again to edit the entire manuscript and highly recommend her. She showed a great understanding of my project, with great edit ideas, but also very encouraging.

    $50

    Price

    5 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • C
    image-docs

    cristina_baron

    RO

    Romania

    Ongoing collaboration
    5

    Working with Leilani has been an absolute pleasure. She was professional, thoughtful, and incredibly attentive to every detail of my manuscript. Her edits improved the clarity, flow, and consistency of the story while always respecting my voice as an author. Communication was excellent throughout the...

    $600-$800

    Price

    4 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • C

    cate_rayne

    US

    United States

    Ongoing collaboration
    5

    Leilani has been exceptional to work with! Her insight and thoughtfulness has made my story so much better. I am a new writer, and her expertise is incredibly helpful in the development my skills. Her guidance made my story sharper, the writing crisper, and the impact more meaningful. I would definitely recommend her!

    $1,000-$2,500

    Price

    5 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
Reviews

403 reviews for this Gig
5.0

(388)
(15)
(0)
(0)
(0)
Rating Breakdown
  • Seller communication level
    5
  • Quality of delivery
    5
  • Value of delivery
    4.9
Sort By
Most relevant
  • R

    rebecca_meghan

    US

    United States

    5

    My co-writer and I are deeply grateful to Leilani for the time she dedicated to our fantasy book. After a year of working on multiple drafts, we knew we needed an objective pair of eyes on our plot development. Leilani was able to provide us detailed suggestions on improving our pacing for traditional...

    $800-$1,000

    Price

    3 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • S

    sayge2024

    US

    United States

    Ongoing collaboration
    5

    I am so HAPPY that I chose Leilani for complete manuscript editing support. Her feedback was incredibly supportive from the position as the reader/consumer- Her suggestions on rephrasing or providing more context within the text to help the reader stay engaged and 'in it' with you, was profound and truly...

    $400-$600

    Price

    4 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • M

    missyterrell

    US

    United States

    Ongoing collaboration
    5

    Leilani was fast, professional and showed great attention to details. I am using her again to edit the entire manuscript and highly recommend her. She showed a great understanding of my project, with great edit ideas, but also very encouraging.

    $50

    Price

    5 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • C
    image-docs

    cristina_baron

    RO

    Romania

    Ongoing collaboration
    5

    Working with Leilani has been an absolute pleasure. She was professional, thoughtful, and incredibly attentive to every detail of my manuscript. Her edits improved the clarity, flow, and consistency of the story while always respecting my voice as an author. Communication was excellent throughout the...

    $600-$800

    Price

    4 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • C

    cate_rayne

    US

    United States

    Ongoing collaboration
    5

    Leilani has been exceptional to work with! Her insight and thoughtfulness has made my story so much better. I am a new writer, and her expertise is incredibly helpful in the development my skills. Her guidance made my story sharper, the writing crisper, and the impact more meaningful. I would definitely recommend her!

    $1,000-$2,500

    Price

    5 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No