I will proofread, edit and add content to your personal statements
Level 2
Has met high performance criteria and has a proven track record for meeting client expectations.
About this Gig
Why me?
- As a lawyer, I am trained to meticulously proofread lengthy and complex text, and critically assess the logical flow and narrative gap in your writing.
- My 10-year experience in reviewing and proofreading university applications as a British Council counsellor gives me direct access to admission officers at top universities. I know what exactly they look for in an application and how to maximise the impact of your PS.
Which services to go for?
- Basic (Proofreading): I will correct your grammar, punctuation and spelling errors;
- Standard (Proofreading + Feedback): I will scrutinise your writing style and content; identify gaps in your narrative; brainstorm new content; teach you the most effective way to write your PS.
- Premium (Content-editing + Deep-editing/Rewriting): You will not find many Fiverr sellers offering this service because most proofreaders are unable to identify gaps in the academic-related content. But as an academic researcher myself, I can help improve your academic prowess in your PS. After enriching the content, I will restructure and reformulate your essay to improve your clarity, conciseness, style and tone consistency, coherence and cohesion.
Language:
English
Content type:
Personal statement
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CV
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Cover letter
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
What subjects have you proofread/edited applications for?
I have helped students to secure offers from Russell Group universities for the most competitive courses, including Accounting and Finance, Actuarial Science, Architecture, Computer Science, Economy, Education, Engineering, Geography, History, Law, Mathematics, Medicine, Natural Sciences, PPE, etc.
I don't know where to start, can you help?
Yes. If you do not currently have a draft, or only have a basic/partial one in bulletpoints, we can work on it together on the Premium Package.
I have generated my personal statement with AI, how can you help?
I have noticed many similar issues in AI-generated PS: plagiarism, insufficient contextual understanding, a lack of personal touch, etc. Universities use tools to spot such content and you will be at risk of rejection. I will help address all of these issues and maximise your chances!
My personal statement is above/under the required wordcount, can you help?
Yes, I can help. Wherever necessary, I will request for additional information. Please message me to discuss which package is most suitable for your specific needs.
I am not sure which package should I choose. Can I send you the draft for a look?
Of course, I'm happy to take a look and advise which package best fits your needs. I devote the same level of effort and passion for all services I provide, and will never push you to go for one beyond what you need.
I have multiple essays for review, can I place them in one order?
Each order is only for 1 personal statement/statement of purpose, but you're welcomed to place multiple offers.
Can you help with my CV/résumé/cover letter/referral letter/sample work?
Yes, I offer reviewing/editing services for all materials for university applications.
我们可以用中文和你沟通吗?可以把中文初稿交给你翻译润色吗?
完全没问题,敲我邮箱时可以直接发中文!
你的纠正(Basic)/诊断(Standard)/内容润色(Premium)服务和其他卖家有什么差别呢?
一、中文无障碍交流。二、我的文书诊断服务(Standard Package)会针对文书内的每一字每一句做批注,不仅提供具体的修改意见,也帮助头脑风暴,产出更具有个人独特性的内容。三、多家英国顶尖大学强调必须在文书内专业相关内容以完善申请动机。然而大多fiverr卖家仅提供语言润色服务,并不具备能力进行学术性研究,因此无法针对专业相关的内容提供意见。我的学术背景为我提供了深厚的学术研究功底,因此我的内容润色服务(Premium Package)会针对专业相关的学术内容的深入扩展,充分发展每一个论点。
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Y yanghe251

Switzerland
Very good experience. If you know your statement is not good but don't know how to improve, she can give you really good suggestions in content.
$50-$100
Price
12 days
Duration
Helpful?I ianyang464

Singapore
She is friendly, professional and responsible! Highly recommend!!
Up to $50
Price
3 days
Duration
Helpful?Y yvngwai

United States
She's the most responsible teacher I've ever seen.
$200-$400
Price
10 days
Duration
Helpful?X xinsydneyiliu

United Kingdom
Professional
Up to $50
Price
4 days
Duration
Helpful?F fan_fei

United States
Satisfied!
Up to $50
Price
7 days
Duration
Helpful?
62 reviews for this Gig
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- Value of delivery
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Y yanghe251

Switzerland
Very good experience. If you know your statement is not good but don't know how to improve, she can give you really good suggestions in content.
$50-$100
Price
12 days
Duration
Helpful?I ianyang464

Singapore
She is friendly, professional and responsible! Highly recommend!!
Up to $50
Price
3 days
Duration
Helpful?Y yvngwai

United States
She's the most responsible teacher I've ever seen.
$200-$400
Price
10 days
Duration
Helpful?X xinsydneyiliu

United Kingdom
Professional
Up to $50
Price
4 days
Duration
Helpful?F fan_fei

United States
Satisfied!
Up to $50
Price
7 days
Duration
Helpful?

