I will provide development editing for your fantasy and science fiction novel

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Hungary

I speak English, Pashto

161 orders completed

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Are you working or have finished working on a fantasy or sci-fi story that needs deeper stronger characters or a tighter plot? Or perhaps something that will connect to the reader?



I offer professional and in-depth developmental editing to help your manuscript shine before it reaches beta readers(me as well) or agents.


With experience in beta reading and critiquing science fiction and fantasy for over 130 authors here on Fiverr, I have decided to shift my focus on the big-picture elements that truly matter: plot logic, character arcs, pacing, worldbuilding, theme, and emotional resonance.


What you'll get:

  • A detailed editorial letter summarizing strengths and improvement areas
  • In-document comments on pacing, conflict, character depth, world rules, dialogue, and more
  • Suggestions to cut filler, enhance structure, and increase narrative tension
  • Honest, respectful, and constructive feedback
  • Style sheet to track your story, completely



Genres I specialize in:

  • Fantasy (epic, urban, dark, YA)
  • Science Fiction (dystopian, space opera, near-future, etc.)
  • Speculative fiction and genre mashups

Language:

English

Genre:

Action

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Adventure

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Children’s books

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History

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Horror/ thriller

Audience :

General readers

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Children

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Teen / young adult

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Adult

POV:

First person

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Second person

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Third person limited

Complexity level:

Simple / easy read

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Intermediate

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Advanced

Voice:

Active

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    troyh1979

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    Australia

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    I was very pleased with the developmental help I received and am happy to recommend Yar to everyone.

    $50

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    5 days

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    naomi_ay

    US

    United States

    5

    Yar did a fantastic job with my 75k literary sci fi manuscript. I received 3 documents: a thoughtful developmental report with critique, strengths/weaknesses, manuscript with comments, and a stylesheet. That is quite generous for the cost! He was very polite in the wording when delivering constructive...

    $200-$400

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    11 days

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  • Seller communication level
    5
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    5
  • Value of delivery
    5
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    troyh1979

    AU

    Australia

    5

    I was very pleased with the developmental help I received and am happy to recommend Yar to everyone.

    $50

    Price

    5 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
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    naomi_ay

    US

    United States

    5

    Yar did a fantastic job with my 75k literary sci fi manuscript. I received 3 documents: a thoughtful developmental report with critique, strengths/weaknesses, manuscript with comments, and a stylesheet. That is quite generous for the cost! He was very polite in the wording when delivering constructive...

    $200-$400

    Price

    11 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No