I will be your developmental editor
About this Gig
Amazon Best Seller Author, Assistant Teacher Poet
As an author whose recent book reached Amazon No.1 in two categories, I bring both creative instinct and professional precision to your manuscript.
What you will receive:
- A clear breakdown of show vs. tell, demonstrated using your own writing as the foundation.
- Sharp, actionable guidance to build narrative momentum and tighten your storys emotional arc.
- Honest, constructive critique of your plot, characters, motives, pacing, and structure.
- Open, thoughtful communication tell me exactly what you want your story to become, and Ill help you shape it.
- A focus on complete satisfaction: my goal isnt just to deliver a service, but to help you grow as a writer.
One writer to another spending big bucks is never a guarantee of great storytelling. Skill is. Savvy is. And the willingness to refine your craft is.
I work with all genres, though romance remains my specialty.
What I evaluate:
- Plot & flow
- Character depth and development
- Clarity & readability
- Inconsistencies
- Story logic and emotional impact
Genre:
Action
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Adventure
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Literary fiction
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Mystery
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Romance
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Fantasy
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
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M moniquecardi471

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He had very concise, considerate critique without sugar-coating . The extra resources look very helpful, also, and I will consider the direction based on these suggestions, like the three-act-structure and links to articles about voice.
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roxannesanjose

United States
Thank you so much for the help!
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soleikaroth

United Kingdom
Outstanding Experience!
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lord_champion

United States
Outstanding Experience!
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New Zealand
yarrothepoet comes at to a piece of writing from a somewhat different angle than most reviewers or beta readers. And that is precisely her strength. All writers need to see their work through different eyes and yarrothepoets eyes will see strengths, weaknesses and potentials that others may miss.
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M moniquecardi471

United States
He had very concise, considerate critique without sugar-coating . The extra resources look very helpful, also, and I will consider the direction based on these suggestions, like the three-act-structure and links to articles about voice.
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roxannesanjose

United States
Thank you so much for the help!
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soleikaroth

United Kingdom
Outstanding Experience!
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lord_champion

United States
Outstanding Experience!
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Helpful?B brianluby

New Zealand
yarrothepoet comes at to a piece of writing from a somewhat different angle than most reviewers or beta readers. And that is precisely her strength. All writers need to see their work through different eyes and yarrothepoets eyes will see strengths, weaknesses and potentials that others may miss.
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