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I will beta read your story and provide honest feedback
Changing worlds one story at a time
I am a 22-year-old university student with a fervent love for storytelling. I have experience beta reading for published authors and have helped fine-tune their manuscripts. Making your work the best ...
About this Gig
I'm an alpha/beta reader with 5+ years of experience who knows the market and has worked with numerous authors. When reading, I focus on providing developmental feedback on the following:
- Characters
- The plot & pacing
- Worldbuilding (systems, accuracy, etc.)
- Emotional impact
- Writing style
My service includes:
- A thorough review of your work, with commentaries on specific scenes that are noteworthy or on obvious plot holes/inconsistencies in your story.
- Constructive feedback, insights, and thoughts on the important elements of your story including the introduction and hook, your characters' voices and their development, the plot's pacing, the story flow & any existing plotholes, the worldbuilding & setting, your writing style and narration.
- Insights into the emotional impact of your story. No matter what genre, this element is key to making your story stay in your readers' minds long after they've closed the book.
- Honest but respectful suggestions on further developing and improving in areas your story lacks.
- I accept questionnaires you would like me to answer or focus on so that my insight can further help you develop your story.
Kindly contact me before ordering!
Language:
English
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
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FAQ
Do you accept questionnaires for my manuscript?
Yes! If you'd prefer that than the reader's report, I'd be happy to give in-depth answers to an unlimited amount of questions and provide constructive feedback.
Which genres do you accept?
I can read in any genre except erotica. Kindly include a trigger warning beforehand if there are any gratuitious violence or graphic imagery of self-harm throughout the story.
I'd only like you to focus on certain elements of my story. Is that alright?
Of course! My services are tailored to suit your author needs. If you would prefer that I focus on a certain element, say your worldbuilding/setting for example, then my feedback will focus solely on that. Kindly shoot me a message before ordering so we can sort out the details!
Can you give chapter-by-chapter feedback?
I can! In a chapter-by-chapter type of feedback, I give detailed in-line comments. If you have questions you'd like me to answer in each chapter, it would cost differently and would need additional time. Contact me for further details!
Which genres do you specialize in?
Though I specialize in the fantasy, sci-fi, and dystopian genre, I am also an avid reader of and have professionally beta read books in these genres: Christian fiction and fiction in general, romance, mystery, and thriller. If you're unsure which genre your book falls under, feel free to contact me!
What age groups do you read in?
I can read in any age group from middle-grade to adult!
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P peter2484
United States
Great beta by a careful and insightful reader! Thank you!
Up to $50
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1 day
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laurenwilliams6
United States
I hired Yeng to review my manuscript, and she delivered insightful, detailed, substantive feedback that I can't wait to implement. I look forward to working with her on future projects and highly recommend her services to others!
$100-$200
Price
6 weeks
Duration
Helpful?M 
martharee392
North Macedonia
I'm very thankful for Jhenica's effort! My work is in the very first stages, with missing connections, plotholes, etc. Jhenica gave incredible insight that I had not considered and immediately added her suggestions to my manuscript. I plan to return to her when I'm further along with my story!
Up to $50
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1 day
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toree_westbrook
United States
Wonderful to work with and went above and beyond! Really helped me with the editing process for my manuscript!
$200-$400
Price
5 weeks
Duration
Helpful?N nlovrino
Repeat Client
Germany
The delivery consisted of inline comments and a detailed reader report. The best thing is that the inline comments provided the reader‘s emotional journey from beginning to end which I find incredibly useful, as well as pointed out parts which were confusing, where the scenes transitions were not perfect etc.! Also answers to my questions! Thanks!
$50-$100
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5 weeks
Duration
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P peter2484
United States
Great beta by a careful and insightful reader! Thank you!
Up to $50
Price
1 day
Duration
Helpful?L laurenwilliams6
United States
I hired Yeng to review my manuscript, and she delivered insightful, detailed, substantive feedback that I can't wait to implement. I look forward to working with her on future projects and highly recommend her services to others!
$100-$200
Price
6 weeks
Duration
Helpful?M martharee392
North Macedonia
I'm very thankful for Jhenica's effort! My work is in the very first stages, with missing connections, plotholes, etc. Jhenica gave incredible insight that I had not considered and immediately added her suggestions to my manuscript. I plan to return to her when I'm further along with my story!
Up to $50
Price
1 day
Duration
Helpful?T toree_westbrook
United States
Wonderful to work with and went above and beyond! Really helped me with the editing process for my manuscript!
$200-$400
Price
5 weeks
Duration
Helpful?N nlovrino
Repeat Client
Germany
The delivery consisted of inline comments and a detailed reader report. The best thing is that the inline comments provided the reader‘s emotional journey from beginning to end which I find incredibly useful, as well as pointed out parts which were confusing, where the scenes transitions were not perfect etc.! Also answers to my questions! Thanks!
$50-$100
Price
5 weeks
Duration
Helpful?
