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I will beta read your book and give you extensive feedback and corrections
Gig Summary
Your reliable and affordable betareader, proofreader and editor!
As an avid reader and aspiring author, I bring my passion for literature to my work as a freelance betareader, proofreader, and editor.
With a First Class Honours Degree in MA Literature and Creativ...
Level 2
Has met high performance criteria and has a proven track record for meeting client expectations.
What people loved about this freelancer
chelseaderuyter
United States
I am so thankful for Yoanna. The work she did is going to make my book so much better, I can tell already. I felt like she understood my book and even caught...
valentina_linn
United States
Yoanna consistently delivers exceptional quality! Her understanding of psychological dynamics, narrative tension, and symbolism is remarkably sharp and she...
kyleturner447
Australia
Yoanna is a pro. I could instantly tell that she loves to read and appreciates the craft of storytelling. A joy to work with and very much appreciated her feedback and ideas.
tv_holiday
United States
I always appreciate Yoanna’s feedback. She goes through the story, no matter how big, and points out everything. I can honestly say that her critiques have...
jonah_books
United States
It's always a joy to work with Yoanna. Her feedback is very thorough, constructive, and encouraging. She's truly a wonderful human being.
About this Gig
Questions I would answer for your manuscript:
- Did the story grip me from the very beginning? If not, why?
- Were some parts of the story confusing and why?
- What did I think about the setting?
- Were your characters authentic and could I relate to them?
- Was there a point where the story dragged? If yes, how can you improve it?
- Was the pacing and tempo of the story good?
- Did the dialogue sound natural to me?
- Was the ending satisfying?
- Does the writing style suit the genre/target audience?
What does Character Analysis include:
/if you want me to analyze all your characters in-depth/
- Analyze the character arc and narrative function of each character;
- Suggesting possible improvements to make sure your characters are authentic;
Why choose me?:
- I promise to provide fast, honest, and detailed feedback;
- I promise extensive and in-depth line-edits throughout your whole work.
- I promise to provide affordable service;
- I promise to help you get one step closer to achieving your dream! :)
Language:
English
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
My Portfolio
FAQ
How would you give feedback on my work?
For every story/novel I work on, I use in-line comments to both express all my impressions and thoughts so you can see the reader's first reaction, and to suggest any corrections and improvements. At the end of the text, you get an extensive report with overall feedback and further comments.
Do you also correct any grammar/ spelling issues?
Yes, every time I spot a grammatical mistake, a spelling slip-up, or just a typo, I always leave this as an in-line comment so you can later go back and correct it. As well as that, I also try to spot any repetitions and suggest possible alternatives to avoid them.
Do you only work with fiction?
No. I work with all genres of stories and novels, short story collections, non-fiction works, memoirs, and self-help books. If in doubt whether your text is something that I can work with, please don't hesitate to contact me and we can talk about it.
My word count is different, what can I do?
I often work with custom offers, so if you think your word count does not necessarily fit in any of the categories or needs more explanation than simply adding up the word count, send me a message and we will find what work work best together. :)
Reviews
835 reviews for this Gig
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C chelseaderuyter
United States
I am so thankful for Yoanna. The work she did is going to make my book so much better, I can tell already. I felt like she understood my book and even caught on to the little things, I wasn't sure if anyone would notice. I loved her way of giving feedback and how easy she is to communicate with. All...
5 weeks
Duration
Y Seller's Response
Helpful?V valentina_linn
United States
Ongoing collaborationYoanna consistently delivers exceptional quality! Her understanding of psychological dynamics, narrative tension, and symbolism is remarkably sharp and she picks up on layers that many readers would miss. Beyond the craft, she is genuinely kind and accommodating and went out of her way to deliver early...
2 days
Duration
Y Seller's Response
Helpful?K 
kyleturner447
Australia
Yoanna is a pro. I could instantly tell that she loves to read and appreciates the craft of storytelling. A joy to work with and very much appreciated her feedback and ideas.
7 days
Duration
Y Seller's Response
Helpful?T tv_holiday
United States
Ongoing collaborationI always appreciate Yoanna’s feedback. She goes through the story, no matter how big, and points out everything. I can honestly say that her critiques have made me a better writer. Thank you Yoanna for being consistent and taking the time to truly review my work.
7 days
Duration
Y Seller's Response
Helpful?J 
jonah_books
United States
Ongoing collaborationIt's always a joy to work with Yoanna. Her feedback is very thorough, constructive, and encouraging. She's truly a wonderful human being.
3 weeks
Duration
Y Seller's Response
Helpful?
Reviews
835 reviews for this Gig
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| (26) | ||
| (2) | ||
| (1) | ||
| (0) |
Rating Breakdown
- Seller communication level
- Quality of delivery
- Value of delivery
Sort By
Most relevant
C chelseaderuyter
United States
I am so thankful for Yoanna. The work she did is going to make my book so much better, I can tell already. I felt like she understood my book and even caught on to the little things, I wasn't sure if anyone would notice. I loved her way of giving feedback and how easy she is to communicate with. All...
5 weeks
Duration
Y Seller's Response
Helpful?V valentina_linn
United States
Ongoing collaborationYoanna consistently delivers exceptional quality! Her understanding of psychological dynamics, narrative tension, and symbolism is remarkably sharp and she picks up on layers that many readers would miss. Beyond the craft, she is genuinely kind and accommodating and went out of her way to deliver early...
2 days
Duration
Y Seller's Response
Helpful?K kyleturner447
Australia
Yoanna is a pro. I could instantly tell that she loves to read and appreciates the craft of storytelling. A joy to work with and very much appreciated her feedback and ideas.
7 days
Duration
Y Seller's Response
Helpful?T tv_holiday
United States
Ongoing collaborationI always appreciate Yoanna’s feedback. She goes through the story, no matter how big, and points out everything. I can honestly say that her critiques have made me a better writer. Thank you Yoanna for being consistent and taking the time to truly review my work.
7 days
Duration
Y Seller's Response
Helpful?J jonah_books
United States
Ongoing collaborationIt's always a joy to work with Yoanna. Her feedback is very thorough, constructive, and encouraging. She's truly a wonderful human being.
3 weeks
Duration
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