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I will beta read and critique your ya fantasy romance novel
Romance Genre Expert
Hello, I’m Yolandi Brooks, an avid romance reader who reads 200+ romance novels each year. My deep love for the genre gives me a strong instinct for what keeps readers hooked, emotionally invested, an...
About this Gig
Looking for honest, constructive feedback on your YA Romance or Romantasy manuscript?
Hi, I'm Yolandi Brooks. As a dedicated fiction enthusiast who reads and analyzes over 200 romance and fantasy novels a year, I know exactly what makes a Young Adult or Romantasy book unputdownable. I will beta read and critique your novel, providing you with real reader reactions balanced with deep-dive developmental insights.
What My Reader Report Covers:
- First Impressions & Hook
- Character Development & Chemistry
- World-Building & Lore
What You Will Receive:
1. A comprehensive Beta Reader Report detailing my structural thoughts on your book.
2. In-line Reader Reaction Comments on your document (using MS Word or Google Docs) showing my real-time thoughts as a reader.
Please note: This is a beta reading gig for story development, plot, and character critique. If you need structural grammar, typos, and sentence-level polishing, please check out my dedicated Proofreading gig!
Let's make your YA romance or romantasy story unforgettable. Pick a package or send me a message for a custom offer!
Language:
English
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German
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Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
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FAQ
What genres do you beta read?
I specialize in romance, YA, YA romance, romantasy, fantasy romance, and other fiction with romance-focused elements. You can message me before ordering if you're unsure whether your manuscript is a good fit.
What will I receive after the beta read?
You'll receive constructive reader feedback tailored to your package, focusing on areas such as characters, romance, pacing, plot, emotional impact, dialogue, and overall reader experience.
Will you edit or rewrite my manuscript?
Beta reading is reader-focused feedback rather than line editing or rewriting. I’ll identify issues and share practical observations to help you make informed revisions.
Can you beta read an unfinished manuscript?
Yes. If you want feedback on a partial manuscript, opening chapters, or an early draft, please message me first so we can determine the most suitable package.
Will your feedback be honest?
Absolutely. I provide honest but respectful and constructive feedback. My goal is to highlight your manuscript's strengths while identifying areas that may affect a reader's enjoyment or understanding.
