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I will beta read your novel, manuscript, or short story
Gig Summary
Manuscript beta reader and developmental feedback editor
Hi, I’m Kathryn — a lawyer, writer, editor, and experienced beta reader. I help fiction writers strengthen their manuscripts with thoughtful, practical feedback on pacing, character, plot, clarity, an...
About this Gig
Please contact me before ordering rush delivery so I can make sure I have time to give your manuscript the attention it deserves.
I will beta read your novel, short story, or manuscript and provide a thoughtful reader report focused on what is working, what is unclear, and where the story could be stronger.
My feedback can address pacing, plot, character development, dialogue, structure, emotional impact, worldbuilding, reader engagement, and any specific questions you want me to consider. I do not simply summarize my reactions, I give clear examples from your draft so you can understand why something is or is not landing.
Please note: This is a beta reading / manuscript critique service, not proofreading, line editing, copyediting, formatting, ghostwriting, or rewriting. I may point out recurring writing issues when they affect the reading experience, but I will not correct every sentence or make changes directly in the manuscript unless we agree on a custom editing order.
This service is best for writers who want honest, practical, encouraging feedback before revising, querying, publishing, or sending their work to another editor.
Genre:
Literary fiction
Language:
English
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
Clients I’ve worked with
Moffett Productions
Content writing for video scripts
Dec 2021-Nov 2022
FAQ
What will I receive?
A reader report with organized feedback on strengths, concerns, and revision opportunities, with examples from your manuscript.
Can I send questions for you to answer?
Yes. I welcome specific questions about character, pacing, plot, romance, ending, worldbuilding, or anything else you want reader feedback on.
Do you read unfinished drafts?
Yes. I can review early drafts, partial manuscripts, short stories, or completed novels.
What genres do you read?
Pretty much anything: fiction, women’s fiction, romance, mystery, literary fiction, YA, non-fiction, biography, memoir, self-help, religious study, etc. I will not review "spicy" romance books, but I'm otherwise open to most genres.
Do you edit or proofread the manuscript?
No. This gig is for beta reading and developmental-style feedback. I may flag recurring issues, but I do not correct every sentence.
Reviews
49 reviews for this Gig
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C caliwriter19
United States
Ongoing collaborationKathryn did a great job in providing meaningful and insightful feedback on my manuscript. Her advice was easy to understand, with clear examples. I really recommend working with her!
$200-$400
Price
2 weeks
Duration
Helpful?C corrinne_y
United States
Kathryn's professionalism shines through in her short reader report over 10000 words of fiction, and she handled everything in a timely, polite, and communicative manner. I received the report in less than 24 hours which is an amazingly fast turnaround. I thank Kathryn for her kind words of encouragement...
$100-$200
Price
2 days
Duration
Helpful?T timthomas866
United States
Kathryn charges more for her services but this is a clear case of you get what you pay for. She obviously picked through my short story with exacting detail and gave the appropriate (and very detailed) feedback. I have never worked with a professional editor from a publisher before but I think this is...
$100-$200
Price
5 days
Duration
Helpful?W 
writer0717
United States
Very happy with this order. She provided honest feedback, including some things that made me rethink how I have written some of the scenes in my book. Exactly what I need from someone working as a developmental editor.
$100-$200
Price
4 days
Duration
Helpful?G 
glenderful
United States
Kathryn's insights proved invaluable at this advanced phase of editing. She demonstrates impressive adaptability responding to a tight brief, granular attention to detail, deep understanding of narrative flow, and precise language fluency. A rare combination! She astutely flagged issues overlooked by...
$200-$400
Price
2 weeks
Duration
Helpful?
Reviews
49 reviews for this Gig
| (44) | ||
| (2) | ||
| (2) | ||
| (1) | ||
| (0) |
Rating Breakdown
- Seller communication level
- Quality of delivery
- Value of delivery
Sort By
Most relevant
C caliwriter19
United States
Ongoing collaborationKathryn did a great job in providing meaningful and insightful feedback on my manuscript. Her advice was easy to understand, with clear examples. I really recommend working with her!
$200-$400
Price
2 weeks
Duration
Helpful?C corrinne_y
United States
Kathryn's professionalism shines through in her short reader report over 10000 words of fiction, and she handled everything in a timely, polite, and communicative manner. I received the report in less than 24 hours which is an amazingly fast turnaround. I thank Kathryn for her kind words of encouragement...
$100-$200
Price
2 days
Duration
Helpful?T timthomas866
United States
Kathryn charges more for her services but this is a clear case of you get what you pay for. She obviously picked through my short story with exacting detail and gave the appropriate (and very detailed) feedback. I have never worked with a professional editor from a publisher before but I think this is...
$100-$200
Price
5 days
Duration
Helpful?W writer0717
United States
Very happy with this order. She provided honest feedback, including some things that made me rethink how I have written some of the scenes in my book. Exactly what I need from someone working as a developmental editor.
$100-$200
Price
4 days
Duration
Helpful?G glenderful
United States
Kathryn's insights proved invaluable at this advanced phase of editing. She demonstrates impressive adaptability responding to a tight brief, granular attention to detail, deep understanding of narrative flow, and precise language fluency. A rare combination! She astutely flagged issues overlooked by...
$200-$400
Price
2 weeks
Duration
Helpful?
