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I will beta read your fantasy or romance manuscript with developmental feedback
Romance and Fantasy Developmental Editor, actionable and honest feedback
I specialize in romance, fantasy, and romantasy manuscripts, offering honest, actionable feedback authors can use. Since 2019, I’ve reviewed 200+ manuscripts and focus on pacing, emotional payoff, cha...
Level 2
Has met high performance criteria and has a proven track record for meeting client expectations.
What people loved about this freelancer
dpeterson12
United States
This was by far the most valuable beta read I’ve received. The level of detail, care, and thought Tonya put into the feedback truly stood out. She didn’t just...
h_parker303
United States
Tonya is one of the best beta readers I've worked with. Her comments showed real engagement with my manuscript and gave me actionable feedback to improve my...
carolina3
United States
Tonya did an amazing job with this beta read. She went above and beyond to help me identify tropes and what would help sell the story. Her critique was thoughtful...
suzannesellers
United States
The first thing I have to praise Tonya for was her direct communication. She reached out to me before she started the project to ensure the end result she provided...
alinasteinberg
United States
This was my first time working with Tonya and I genuinely cannot recommend her enough. Her feedback was detailed, thoughtful, and insightful in a way that completely...
About this Gig
Your manuscript deserves feedback that helps it grow stronger.
I am a romance and fantasy developmental editor, since 2019, with over 200 manuscripts completed. My feedback combines strong reader instinct with big-picture story analysis, so you can see what is working, what is not, and where the manuscript may need stronger revision before it reaches agents, editors, or readers.
You will receive feedback on:
- opening impact and hook strength
- character development and emotional connection
- plot, conflict, and stakes clarity
- pacing, momentum, and slowdowns
- dialogue consistency and character voice
- worldbuilding and setting clarity
- structure, chapter flow, and ending payoff
- plot holes, unresolved threads, and predictability
- strengths, weak points, and actionable suggestions
Every order includes: inline manuscript comments, Q&A reader report, and NDA signing.
Best for: romance, fantasy, romantasy, dark romance, paranormal, and sci-fi romance. PDF or DOCX. Please message me before ordering to confirm availability.
This service focuses on big-picture story feedback rather than proofreading or line editing.
Genre:
Romance
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Science fiction
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Fantasy
Language:
English
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
What's the difference between beta reading and editing?
Beta reading focuses on reader experience and big-picture story feedback, including pacing, characters, plot clarity, and emotional payoff. Editing involves changing the manuscript itself, such as line edits, grammar, or deeper story revision.
Will you sign an NDA?
Yes, absolutely. I sign NDAs without hesitation. Your unpublished work is confidential.
Can I ask follow-up questions after you finish?
Yes. I am happy to answer reasonable follow-up questions about the feedback after delivery.
Will you post my book to your socials?
Probably. Just let me know when it is released to the public.
Will you leave reviews?
Maybe. I only do this for people who tell met he book is out, and for books I truly enjoyed. You cannot buy my reviews and I won't lie.
What file types and genres do you accept?
I accept PDF and DOCX manuscripts. I specialize in romance, fantasy, romantasy, dark romance, paranormal, and sci-fi romance.
Reviews
203 reviews for this Gig
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S suzannesellers
Repeat Client
United States
I only have good things to say about working with this Beta Reader. She has helped me with at least 3 books so far and I find her opinions and insights invaluable. Working with her is absolutely AWESOME!!! I will continue to use her moving forward.
$50-$100
Price
8 days
Duration
Helpful?H 
h_parker303
Repeat Client
United States
Tonya is one of the best beta readers I've worked with. Her comments showed real engagement with my manuscript and gave me actionable feedback to improve my story. I appreciated that she pointed out strengths and weaknesses in a direct, honest way without being either overly flattering or too brutal. I would absolutely work with her again.
$50-$100
Price
6 days
Duration
Helpful?C carolina3
Repeat Client
United States
Another great experience with Tonya! She knows Romantasy - the tropes, the beats, the expectations - and she makes sure your book is hitting them all. Her report is thorough, her recommendations are clear and detailed, and she takes the time to really immerse herself in your world. She's just a phenomenal...
$50-$100
Price
7 days
Duration
Helpful?C carolina3
Repeat Client
United States
Tonya did an amazing job with this beta read. She went above and beyond to help me identify tropes and what would help sell the story. Her critique was thoughtful and nuanced. She was clear about what worked in the story and what didn't. But she went further. She actually explained what would make the...
$50-$100
Price
6 days
Duration
Helpful?T tddavis6
United States
All I have to say is WOW! I am beyond impressed. My critiques were beyond insightful and incredibly valuable. The attention to detail and the way she caught these little moments I planted honestly blew me away. This whole experience has made me excited to go back into my story and rework some things...
Up to $50
Price
7 days
Duration
Helpful?
Reviews
203 reviews for this Gig
| (190) | ||
| (11) | ||
| (1) | ||
| (1) | ||
| (0) |
Rating Breakdown
- Seller communication level
- Quality of delivery
- Value of delivery
Sort By
Most relevant
S suzannesellers
Repeat Client
United States
I only have good things to say about working with this Beta Reader. She has helped me with at least 3 books so far and I find her opinions and insights invaluable. Working with her is absolutely AWESOME!!! I will continue to use her moving forward.
$50-$100
Price
8 days
Duration
Helpful?H h_parker303
Repeat Client
United States
Tonya is one of the best beta readers I've worked with. Her comments showed real engagement with my manuscript and gave me actionable feedback to improve my story. I appreciated that she pointed out strengths and weaknesses in a direct, honest way without being either overly flattering or too brutal. I would absolutely work with her again.
$50-$100
Price
6 days
Duration
Helpful?C carolina3
Repeat Client
United States
Another great experience with Tonya! She knows Romantasy - the tropes, the beats, the expectations - and she makes sure your book is hitting them all. Her report is thorough, her recommendations are clear and detailed, and she takes the time to really immerse herself in your world. She's just a phenomenal...
$50-$100
Price
7 days
Duration
Helpful?C carolina3
Repeat Client
United States
Tonya did an amazing job with this beta read. She went above and beyond to help me identify tropes and what would help sell the story. Her critique was thoughtful and nuanced. She was clear about what worked in the story and what didn't. But she went further. She actually explained what would make the...
$50-$100
Price
6 days
Duration
Helpful?T tddavis6
United States
All I have to say is WOW! I am beyond impressed. My critiques were beyond insightful and incredibly valuable. The attention to detail and the way she caught these little moments I planted honestly blew me away. This whole experience has made me excited to go back into my story and rework some things...
Up to $50
Price
7 days
Duration
Helpful?
