I will read your screenplay and give it a thorough analysis

Need a fresh pair of eyes on your story? Need someone who can be brutally honest about plot, story development, dialogue, character arcs. Are you in need of someone who IS NOT going to try to tell you how good it is, but rather help you discover weaknesses in it to make it better? I wont blow sunshine up your butt, but I will give you detailed analysis of whats lacking in your project. Will read first 160 pages any more is 2 long